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The Game and How Toby Whithouse Lost It

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Right, I suppose I should start with what this thing is and why I want to write about it. The Game is Toby Whithouse's six episode 1970s-set spy drama, seemingly originally intended to be a big BBC production before never quite making it to the schedule and making its debut on BBC America, where it got next to no coverage and largely sunk like a stone. To some extent, this last fact is what interests me about it. When announced, it felt like Whithouse's audition piece: his big BBC One drama with which he'd become the inevitable successor to Steven Moffat. But between his absence from both 2013 and 2014's Doctor Who and the fact that this basically landed flat on its face, the landscape has changed, such that Whithouse has largely fallen away as the heir apparent. And since this really looks like it's going to disappear without much of a trace, that seems worth documenting.

So, first, because I assume essentially none of you have seen it, the basics. The Game follows an elite MI-5 team as they investigate a seemingly massive Russian operation involving sleeper agents in the UK. You've got a pretty standard set of stock characters. Brian Cox is charming as MI-5 head "Daddy," Paul Ritter is the poorly closeted gay high society type, Chloe Pirrie is the secretary who proves terribly competent and eventually becomes an agent in her own right, Victoria Hamilton is what in a more modern-set show would be the profiler, Jonathan Aris is her autism-spectrum husband and audio specialist, Shaun Dooley is a cop assigned to MI-5, and Tom Hughes is the protagonist, Joe Lambe, who was blatantly cast on the principle of "cast me somebody who looks like Benedict Cumberbatch only a decade younger." Over the course of the story, it becomes obvious that someone's a mole. Is it Joe Lambe, whose loyalties have been questioned since a botched operation a year ago that resulted in the death of his lover, and who has old scores to settle now?

No, it's totally Sarah, Victoria Hamilton's character, which is in hindsight obvious because she's the only one of the set who isn't a blatant cliche, so clearly she has to turn out to be a femme fatale in the end.

This is making The Game sound like it's excessively easy to mock, which, to be fair, it in many ways is. The 1970s espionage setting means that it's unabashedly competing with two of the great heavyweights of British television drama: the BBC adaptations John Le Carre's Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy and Smiley's People, and The Sandbaggers, an ITV number that famously only ran for three seasons when its creator Ian Mackintosh disappeared, prompting endless conspiracy theories suggesting that Mackintosh, a former Royal Navy officer, had revealed something he shouldn't have on the show. Both shows crackle with 1970s authenticity, what with having been made in the 1970s (well, Smiley's People was early 80s, but), and are nuanced character pieces about flawed geniuses in worlds full of flawed incompetents who do terrible things in pursuit of noble goals. In short, exemplars of that classic British television trick of replacing all the action sequences in something with tense conversations between great and good British actors like Alec Guinness, Roy Marsden, Richard Vernon, and Michael Jayston. This is a tradition of television in which anything short of outright greatness is going to be conspicuous in its failures. Given this, the blatant mediocrity of The Game is an obvious failing.

Except that's not quite fair. The Game isn't so much blatantly mediocre as it is a show that constantly threatens to resolve into something brilliant before turning out to be perfectly content with being derivative. Even well into the final episode, there's an electrifying tension based on the ambiguity over who does and doesn't still have secret plans that haven't been revealed. It's just that none of it actually manages to go anywhere. Still, its failures are instructive in terms of understanding how television operates in late 2014, and what the dominant tricks and concerns of the medium are.

One thing that interesting television, where interesting is defined as "interesting to me," has been increasingly doing is trading hard on making the basic nature of the show a source of ambiguity and tension. Moffat, of course, is the reigning master of this, with his work being hugely concerned with the question "what sort of story is this." (Case in point, Death in Heaven, where the central tension is "what sort of protagonist is the Doctor," and where the teaser for Last Christmas involves explicitly discussing whether the ending of the episode is an acceptable resolution or if the story ought be defined differently.) This is a tricky business in some ways, because it really screws with a lot of models of narrative based on some notion of "playing fair" with the audience.

Generally, there's two approaches to doing a suspense-based narrative. In one, the audience's knowledge is kept basically in line with the protagonist's knowledge, so that we get information at the same time they do. The tension comes out of trying to figure out the gaps - it's the tension of a mystery. In the other, the audience knows more than the protagonist, and watches the protagonist catch up to them. In this approach, the tension comes out of the question of whether the protagonist will catch up. It's the tension of a countdown, the archetypal example being one from Alfred Hitchcock about a bomb under a table.

But the "what sort of story is this" approach requires a third variation, in which the audience knows considerably less than the protagonists. The Game, for instance, hinges massively on the question of whether Joe Lambe is a traitor or not, carefully giving strong evidence in each direction while never allowing us to actually get solid confirmation until the climax of the final episode. More to the point, it relies on a narrative structure in which revelations to the audience dramatically alter the way in which we watch scenes. The reveal that Sarah is the mole, for instance, takes place in the final scene of the fifth episode, in a scene that deliberately comes out of almost nowhere, and in an episode where a key plot beat is a red herring reveal that Alan, her husband, is the mole, which is built to with a montage of various characters going about their morning routines while we wait to see which one is going to check a dead drop. (Alan, it turns out, is innocent, but has already figured out that Sarah is the mole and has decided to protect her, although why he checks her dead drop is inscrutable.)

More broadly, the entire Russian operation is an endlessly shifting thing, the contours of which change episode-by-episode. By the end, it's an entirely incoherent shamble - a series of deliberate red herrings and decoys that turns out to hinge on the assumption that Joe will figure out that Sarah is the mole on a precise day chosen a year in advance, that he'll confront her privately, and that he'll respond to the information she gives him in a precise and predictable way. The climax involves a montage of events that, in order for the resolution to work, must not have actually been taking place concurrently, or that require Brian Cox to effectively teleport from a confrontation with a treasonous deputy Prime Minister (my aren't we subtle, Toby) to the ops room in a matter of minutes.

It would, of course, be a mistake to complain that these are plot holes. This is the sort of thing Doctor Who and Sherlock get away with as a matter of course. And the fact that the show can work like this is telegraphed repeatedly. It's called The Game, after all. The idea that everything is just a charade is there in the title. And withholding key information from the audience is explicitly one of its basic tricks. It's not a problem in the least that the resolution not only can't be guessed from the setup (that being an essential part of how the "what kind of story is this" show works), nor that the Big Elaborate Russian Conspiracy doesn't actually make sense (what evil mastermind's plan does?). Not even Brian Cox's teleporting routine is a problem as such. Enough information is conveyed with pacing, camera angles, editing, and music to keep the dramatic arc running, and by the end the audience is so used to the structure of "and now here's a reveal that changes our understanding of the basic structure" that we can be trusted to put aside our previous knowledge without protest.

No, the problem is that the end configuration just isn't very interesting. The big twist is that Joe's fridged lover is secretly alive, and the Russians plan to use that to blackmail him into complicity with their operation at the last second. The resolution is that Joe was not actually stupid enough to walk into their trap without backup, and there's a sniper positioned to take out the Russian sniper. The final confrontation between Joe and the Russian mastermind has the dying Russian gloat that he's beaten Joe anyway, because he can never truly trust his lover. Only the subverted fridging is even remotely clever here, and it's not actually allowed to have any impact because everything else is straight from the "obvious genre trope" bin.

Which is the crux of the problem. The "what kind of story is this" structure relies on the answer being "something new and innovative." Certainly this is the implicit logic of the show that The Game tacitly invokes, Game of Thrones, which takes this structure to its most all-encompassing and bombastic end. That show is electrified by the way in which it uses psuedo-historically accurate materialism to engineer surprise disruptions of the mythic fantasy logic that quietly (albeit increasingly loudly) underpins the world. But given actual historical materialism to work with and a similar central metaphor, Whithouse is ultimately unable to conjure anything more interesting than a story about a brooding white male protagonist indistinguishable from every other brooding white male protagonist in contemporary television. (It's in this regard both revealing and damning that Whithouse is on record as being opposed to a female Doctor.)

Perhaps most frustratingly, the show comes close to a much more interesting approach. A subplot about Sarah secretly taking contraceptive pills comes to a head in the same episode that she's revealed as the mole, and she's got a fantastic monologue about how she's not willing to bring a child into the world she sees every day at work, and not willing to stop working her job in such a dangerous world. It seems for all the world like we're going to get an explanation whereby she's turned traitor because she views any end to the Cold War, even a British defeat, as preferable to the game's continuation - a sort of maternal Ozymandias motivation that, given Whithouse's avowed love of Alan Moore, seemed entirely plausible.  Instead she's a traitor because... erm... well, actually, they never get around to resolving that.

The result is a show that isn't awful, but that is unsettling in its flaws. Or, at least, a show whose flaws are such that they cast Whithouse's previous successes in a new light. Even back with A Town Called Mercy, there was an increasing sense of Whithouse as a writer who was basically in step with the television of 2008 or so, but who has spent six years failing to evolve. It's not that he's not learning new tricks - The Game is blatantly a response to Sherlock, and tries to make a go at that show's mesmerizing shell game of ambiguity over who's figured out what. Rather, it's that he's not really taken on board anything about why these tricks work. He's not interested in telling new sorts of stories.

To be blunter, Whithouse belongs to the very 00s era of television where it is all about, as I said, brooding male protagonists. In this regard it's unsurprising that he was drawn to the 70s spy setting, which was in many ways ahead of its time in its choices of protagonists. But it's nevertheless slightly shocking how, in just a few years, Whithouse has managed to go from looking like a talented up and comer to looking like someone who's on the wrong side of an aesthetic revolution. Frankly, if we're going to have someone stuck in the past for the next showrunner of Doctor Who, I'd rather have Gatiss, whose nostalgia is idiosyncratic and weird, than Whithouse, whose nostalgia ends up being a reaction against almost everything interesting going on in television right now.

Which just about sums up The Game: it's a show about the 70s that's tragically stuck in the 00s.

The Advantage of my Antiquated TARDIS (Journey to the Center of the TARDIS)

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I'll be honest, I don't have anything funny to say about this image.
I was just scrolling through the Google Image Search for this episode
and thought "you know, that is pretty..."
If you missed it, we had a post on The Game yesterday.

It’s April 27th, 2013. Rudimental is at number one with “Waiting All Night,” with will.i.am, Daft Punk, Nelly, Pink, and Psy also charting, the latter not with “Gangnam Style.” In news, the US stock market loses 1% of its value momentarily due to the AP Twitter feed getting hacked and releasing false news of a terrorist attack injuring President Obama, and, erm, that’s about it. 

On television, it’s Journey to the Center of the TARDIS. As with much of Season Seven, it’s strange how a year has changed this. At the time, it seemed an oddly disjointed story that was in need of another draft. Now… well, it still seems like that, admittedly. The “they convinced their brother he was a robot” twist is infamously absurd, although I admit, I’ve always felt like it’s a marvelous return to the completely bonkers legacy of a program that was unafraid to be ridiculous. I admit that I’ve never quite gotten over the moment, about half an hour in, when I was completely convinced the time zombies were going to turn out to be an origin story of the Silence (of course they’re forged in an exploding TARDIS!), only to have a wildly less interesting reveal. And the fact that the story can be summarized as “the TARDIS is hijacked by a bunch of black men because the Doctor let a woman drive” is, to say the least, unfortunate. 

And, of course, it is the story in which the complaint that Moffat is fond of reset buttons really does acquire legs. This is one of those cases where the one time something really doesn’t work ends up making all the times it did weirdly conspicuous and slightly suspect. It is true that there are a solid few times that Moffat does the “and at the end of the story we undo everything that happened” trick, but generally he avoids the extent to which this is a frustrating twist that’s too similar to “it was all a dream” by making it so that our main characters remember it both ways, allowing the significant consequences of the adventure to still count. Yes, The Big Bang and The Wedding of River Song both get undone at the end, but notably, they don’t get undone for any of the major characters within them. 

That’s not, unfortunately, how this one works. Journey to the Center of the TARDIS completely undoes the adventure for Clara. Which is immensely frustrating, because it actually has some very good character development for her. On one level, this is just a crass delaying tactic. It’s a way for the season to have its cake and eat it too, paying lip service to developing the Impossible Girl arc further and, in effect, spending a whole episode rehearsing the finale. But it’s also notable that the story brings Clara as close to her post-Name of the Doctor characterization as she gets in Season 7B, only to then drag her back.

As with much of Season 7B, this last point is important. More than any story this season save perhaps The Rings of Akhaten, however, this is improved once the Impossible Girl arc is resolved. Clara’s stinging condemnations of the Doctor and her declaration that he’s the scariest thing on the TARDIS resonate. Many of the oddities, most particularly the way in which the story holds the Doctor at a slight remove, jump out impressively when you realize that this is the point of the exercise. 

There is also, fittingly for the 50th Anniversary, a measure of historical repair work done here. It’s notable that it took until The Doctor’s Wife for the new series to really hint at the idea that the TARDIS contained considerable depth beyond the console room, a point that, while not exactly a mainstay of the classic series, is nevertheless a classic part of Doctor Who lore. And while The Doctor’s Wife added immeasurably to the weight of TARDIS lore and, in many ways, did more for the sense of the TARDIS’s scale than this or any other story, it still mostly just added corridors to run through. Journey to the Center of the TARDIS, being a Doctor Who story, does indeed have loads of corridors, but also finally makes the TARDIS feel like the infinitely large maze of possibility that it’s always been suggested as. 

So while it is, admittedly, a bit weird to try to correct the faults of The Invasion of Time in 2013, it’s worth acknowledging that this story does, in fact, do a lot. Indeed, it manages to consolidate and make explicit large swaths of TARDIS lore in a way that satisfyingly acknowledges the past. Sure, it’s only a couple of die-hard anoraks who actually care that we’ve now finally sorted out the whole “wait is the Eye of Harmony on Gallifrey or on TARDISes” thing, but equally, the idea that every single TARDIS is individually built out of an exploding star on the brink of collapsing into a black hole really does give them a sense of majesty that they deserve. Similarly, the explicit acknowledgment of the “conceptual geometry circuits” is not necessary in any meaningful sense, but it’s also nice to finally have that as an explicit statement, as it’s always been one of the more enticing things hinted at by the existing lore.

But in hindsight, where this really distinguishes itself is in terms of Clara. The Impossible Girl arc, as has been noted many a time, does not actually do Clara any favors this season. This is no fault of Jenna Coleman, who spends 2013 laying foundation for a performance she’d expand on dramatically the next season. But this, it turns out, is a keystone performance. The idea of Clara as a companion who actively interrogates the Doctor is ultimately going to become essential to who she is. The idea of the companion as a humanizing force for the Doctor has always been there, and has been a huge focus of the new series ever since Davies’s “Lonely God” approach, but Clara takes a different approach.

Specifically, Clara is very much defined by a genre awareness that means that she doesn’t just critique the Doctor, she critiques the story. This is, in fact, explicit in this episode, where her reaction to the time zombies is framed in terms of “basic storytelling.” Given Moffat’s inclination towards building the suspense of a story around the question of what sort of story it is, this is a hugely useful type of character for him. Indeed, it’s essential to the Impossible Girl arc that Clara be a character who can offer a moral critique of the story she’s in. 

Except it’s not even quite that. There clearly is a moral dimension to the Impossible Girl arc - it’s a direct rejoinder to the critique that all of Moffat’s female characters are puzzles to be solved. But this isn’t the critique Clara actually offers of it. Amy was the character who offered straightforward moral critiques of the Doctor - something that was a part of her character from her second story on. But Clara’s critiques of the Doctor are critiques of genre and storytelling. Or, put another way, they’re aesthetic critiques. 

One consequence is that they’re much more personal, which is fitting for the Impossible Girl arc. The problem becomes the Doctor’s erasure of Clara - his refusal to see her for who she is. It’s not about the mystery, but rather about the way in which the mystery is a flawed lens through which to view her. But this is fundamentally a selfish desire - a point that, of course, eventually gets reaffirmed with Clara’s self-identification as a “bossy control freak.” Nevertheless, it’s a significant shift. Amy, ultimately, wanted her story to be the “right” story. Clara, on the other hand, wants ownership of her story. Goodness has nothing to do with it, as it were.

And this, crucially, is reinforced by Coleman’s performance. One of the unheralded aspects of this story is the skill with which Coleman handles lengthy solo scenes in the TARDIS. She gets a fair amount of talking to herself to make it easier, but so much of that section of the story is really anchored by the physicality of Coleman’s performance. It’s worth rewatching to see the way she uses the frame - her working out of the claw marks on the TARDIS wall is particularly elegant. She’s lithe and precise, but she’s also always making quite large movements that take up quite a bit of space. It’s something that never really gets a chance to be thoroughly developed, but there’s a beautiful contrast between Coleman and Smith in the fact that both give immensely physical performances, and more to the point, both give physically big performances, in the sense of taking up a lot of space with their performance. And yet nevertheless, their performances are fundamental opposites. Smith is full of broad, self-consciously awkward movements. He flails, famously. Coleman, on the other hand, is precise and mannered. The amount of characterization implicit in that is immense. 

It is perhaps notable that we’ve made it this far without saying much of anything about the supporting cast in this story, save for a wry joke about the “they tricked him into thinking he was a robot” revelation. Part of this is simply that they are rather a weak link in the story. Part of this is simply the writing. With Bram dying before he has much characterization, Tricky being ludicrous, and Gregor being both one-note and deliberately unlikeable, there’s not a heck of a lot to do with them. It’s hard not to wish that the all non-white supporting cast hadn’t been saved for almost any other episode of the season so that we didn’t get the uncomfortable moment of the all-black cast being a bunch of looters. 

But there’s still a point worth picking at a bit, which is Tricky. As I noted, the ludicrousness of his plot doesn’t actually stand out particularly when compared to large swaths of the classic series, and a fair bit of the new one. All the same, much as I’m charmed by its sheer pluck, I can’t really argue with a straight face that it works particularly well. It’s tempting to say that this is because that sort of ludicrousness doesn’t actually work anymore, but equally, it’s not like most of the obvious examples from the classic series really spark as high points in the sense of “things you can show other people without embarrassment.” This sort of completely bonkers plot twist has always been something to love as an idiosyncrasy of Doctor Who, as opposed to as a sensible thing to do.


No, the real problem is that this is just a kind of poor choice of stories to put the twist in. As flawed as its engagement with the arc may be, this is the one story other than Name of the Doctor that actually engages substantively with the Impossible Girl arc. An arc, you’ll recall, that is about subverting the idea of treating characters as mysteries to be solved. It is, in other words, a storyline with which a bunch of mysteries that are solved by surprise reveals like “he’s not actually a robot” and “the Time Zombie is Clara” actively clashes. The structure of Journey to the Center of the TARDIS is at war with its message. That’s on one level the entire point of the Impossible Girl arc, but there’s not actually any engagement with the conflict. It’s not a source of tension, it’s just a tonal mismatch. As with Thompson’s other scripts, there’s not so much a sense of what the story wants to be as there is a sense of the job the story wants to do. The job gets done, but at the end of it, we come back to the one question that can’t really be answered about this story: why on Earth did anyone think addressing just one of the many flaws of The Invasion of Time was worth doing thirty-five years after the fact?

Saturday Waffling (December 13th, 2014)

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Describe what you want Doctor Who to be like in 2017. Who's in it? Who's making it? What is it trying to do?

This is Philip Sandifer: Writer, currently featuring TARDIS Eruditorum and The Last War in Albion

I am currently working on: the secret Doctor Who project.

Post of the week: The Game and How Toby Whithouse Lost It

Now Just a Moment: The Doctors Revisited (Tom Baker)

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That this should prove so difficult is in many ways revealing. First, we should start with what this isn't, which is an account of Tom Baker as the definitive Doctor. Satisfyingly, this isn't accomplished with some deconstruction. This is unabashed hagiography - just not to the exclusion of other eras. The result is on a basic level satisfying: the joy that is Tom Baker's Doctor is celebrated, but without the distorting effect that the era sometimes has.

But it's curious that there's no real attention given to the sheer span of Baker's tenure. Indeed, what really jumps out about this is that Baker's tenure is reduced almost entirely to its first half. There's some clips from City of Death, and K-9 makes the companion list, but for the most part there's not a breath of acknowledgment of anything that wasn't part of the Hinchcliffe era. Romana isn't mentioned outside of the City of Death clips. Davros is talked about entirely in terms of Genesis of the Daleks. The other stories to get decent clips are Terror of the Zygons, Robot, Talons of Weng-Chiang, and The Ark in Space.

It's not full-out erasure, and there's certainly no overt misrepresentations, but it's strange to see the Hinchcliffe-only take on Tom Baker, simply because it opens a weird gap in the chronology of this - there's a chunk as long as the Hartnell or Troughton eras that's all but cut from the official history.

Some of that is a product of the focus only on actors. The good old "gothic horror to comedy" transition that is part of the history of the program through this era is, fair enough, outside the remit of The Doctors Revisited. And the aspects of the Doctor's character that are focused on are mainly the more comedic ones, so in a way, even if all the examples are Hinchcliffe-era, it's the Williams-era version of the character that's remembered. Which has kind of always been the case.

But another way of putting that is that this is account is almost completely uninterested in the stories. Tom Baker's performance consumes everything around it, even today. The fact that this is the first installment of The Doctor's Revisited to have the Doctor in question on hand to interview adds to that, although the actual use of Tom Baker tends to be as a slightly unreliable narrator of his own era. But the focus is very firmly on the character, which Tom Baker as good as says at the beginning, when he admits that the line between himself and his character got blurred.

None of this is helped by the choice of stories to show afterwards. The Pyramids of Mars is not a bad story, although its fourth episode is a bit of a mess. But it's a tragically safe choice, and it's telling that Moffat, in introducing it, finds himself mostly talking about Tom Baker's performance once again before adding a few sentences about how the story's pretty good. The Ark in Space, The Terror of the Zygons, The Brain of Morbius, The Robots of Death, and City of Death were all the right length, and all perfectly defensible choices. All of them, one suspects, Moffat could have said more about than "it makes sci-fi out of a mummy movie."

So in an odd way, despite avoiding the trap of proclaiming Tom Baker to be the best Doctor, this special ends up falling into all of the same problems. No matter what you do, somehow, even now, the sheer charisma of Baker's performance seems to crowd everything else out of the picture. But after this many decades of that being true, one almost has to concede that the performance might just actually be that good and that charismatic.

An Unruly Torrent (The Last War in Albion Part 75: Violence and Versions)

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This is the third of fifteen parts of The Last War in Albion Chapter Nine, focusing on Alan Moore's work on V for Vendetta for Warrior (in effect, Books One and Two of the DC Comics collection). An omnibus of all fifteen parts can be purchased at Smashwords. If you purchased serialization via the Kickstarter, check your Kickstarter messages for a free download code.

The stories discussed in this chapter are currently available in a collected edition, along with the eventual completion of the story. UK-based readers can buy it here.

Previously in The Last War in AlbionAlan Moore's work on V for Vendetta included some of his earliest uses of one of his signature techniques, that of paralleling narration or dialogue from one scene with images from another to highlight the contrast.

"Institutions and authorities designed for the far simpler reality of just a hundred years ago have burst their banks; have found their timeworn principles inadequate to a flash influx of insight and revelation, an unruly torrent carrying us all struggling towards the edge of a Niagra future in amidst our driftwood debris of outmoded ideologies."- Alan Moore, birthday greetings to Chelsea Manning

Figure 570: V's quotations from Macbeth in
the first installment resonate with his actions
in rescuing Evey. (Written by Alan Moore, art
by David Lloyd, from "The Villain" in Warrior
#1, 1982)
But “Virtue Victorious” does not use its contrast for comedy, or, at least, not for any straightforward comedy, and the point is not the contrast between the bishop’s words and the images, but the way in which the two intersect and resemble each other. The bishop is praying for divine forgiveness for the child molestation he’s about to commit, but when he speaks of “the evil one who is surely come amongst us in this, the hour of our greatest trial,” the images of V fighting his way through the guards give clear double meaning to these words. The sequence is of course not unprecedented - it is in many ways simply a refinement of the technique Moore was using back in the first installment, where he had V quoting Macbeth while slicing his way through the Fingermen threatening Evey. But the refinement is in this case significant, with the text and images in “Virtue Victorious” coming from two distinct scenes that are allowed, in effect, to play simultaneously. As the comic went on, Moore grew even more confident, eventually doing away with most of the dialogue and words entirely and giving Lloyd stretches of pages at a time in which the storytelling is entirely visual, or where, to use an example from Book Two, a chapter in which the only dialogue comes from television broadcasts playing out in the background. These are in some ways small potatoes compared to the expansive formal and stylistic experiments that Moore would later become known for, but nevertheless, the advancement within the course of the serial is significant, and it’s not surprising that Moore refers to the comic as “one of the first real major breakthroughs I made in terms of my own personal style.”

But for all that V for Vendetta evolved formally, it’s clear that the overall outline snapped into place fairly early, and Moore’s setting up of the larger theme of violence and its legitimacy in Book One is clearly aimed at allowing further exploration of that theme at a later date. It is in this regard perhaps significant to note that the chapter entitled “Violence” was not actually Moore’s first attempt to do a chapter with that title. The first attempt came four chapters earlier, when he wrote a script for the fifth chapter, to be published in Warrior #5 in September of 1982 (the same month as his short story “Sunburn” in 2000 AD), and at that point using the title “Violence.” As David Lloyd tells the story, this script was the lone time on V for Vendetta that he “saw something [Moore had] written for it that failed to slot into place like the perfectly machined component I always expected him to manufacture,” and that the script seemed rushed and generic. Moore, for his part, immediately asked Lloyd what he’d thought of the script when they talked, then cut him off at “well, erm” to say that he agreed and would write a different one.

The bulk of the abandoned script consists of two paralleled sequences - one of Evey and V sparring in the Shadow Gallery, and the other of a training operation focused on capturing or killing V, overseen by Derek Almond. The former consists of V taking dirty shots at Evey - striking her when her back is turned and she’s massaging her leg from an earlier blow. Eventually Evey, enduring a lecture from V about how she’s improving, but “must learn not to be so predictable. The essence of success is surprise,” finally snaps - Moore describes her as “boiling with suppressed fury” and notes to Lloyd, “I don’t know if you’ve ever been a beginner at a martial arts class and had the shit stomped out of you by people far better than yourself, but if you have then you’ll know how Evey feels. She is trembling with impotent rage” - and knees V in the crotch. He staggers back, leaning on the mantlepiece in pain, and limps off telling Evey “that was very good… never fight people on their own terms. You’re learning.”

Figure 571: Warrior #5, which was originally
intended to house an episode of V for Vendetta
entitled "Violence."
The latter sequence, on the other hand, hinges on a well-rehearsed and well-drilled takedown exercise in which the central twist is the revelation that the character the audience is initially allowed to believe might be V (Moore specifies that the first cut from the Shadow Gallery to the training exercise should be “sudden and very confusing”) is in fact a cop. The sequence ends with a cut from Almond drilling his forces to the Leader, named for the first time as Adam Susan, consulting with the computer, Fate, on the likelihood of Almond’s plan succeeding (Fate assesses the odds of success at 78.055%), and Susan ultimately decides to enact Fate’s plan. The script ends with another narrative caption reading, “His name is Adam Susan. he is called the leader. But fate has spoken, and he does as he is told. Immediately.” 

As with the later chapter entitled “Violence,” the purpose of the script is clearly to juxtapose these two instances of violence. But unlike the actual published “Violence,” there is no moral dimension to the violence on display. Both acts of violence are simulations. They are not being pitted against each other in any moral sense, but rather in a purely tactical and instrumental sense. The only question is which approach is more effective - Almond’s well-drilled operation, or V’s embrace of unpredictability. In this regard the implicit answer is perhaps too simple, with V’s methodology clearly serving as a response to the rigid approach of Almond and his Fingermen. Indeed, this simplicity pervades the unused Chapter Five, and it’s not hard to see why Lloyd objected to a script that, in his view, leaned too heavily on a cliche martial arts scene and “didn’t really take us very far.” 

But the nature of the abandoned script’s take on violence is indicative of the terms on which Moore was conceiving of the series at this stage. The issue of violence is clearly entirely instrumental. The chapter is only concerned with the question of what approach to violence is more effective, an issue it treats as fundamentally tied to the underlying conflict between V and the fascist regime, and isn’t even broaching the question of violence as a moral issue at this point. More to the point, by the time it does approach violence as a moral issue, it is purely as a question of two different approaches to being a revolutionary terrorist. Even as it becomes a moral question, in other words, it still remains fundamentally a discussion about tactics - a secondary issue to the book’s main themes.

Figure 572: Adam Susan drives past the statue
of Justice atop the Old Bailey as he monologues
about the virtues of fascism. (Written by Alan
Moore, art by David Lloyd, in Warrior #5, 1982)
These themes are rendered most explicit in the chapter Moore wrote to replace the abandoned “Violence” version of Chapter Five, entitled “Versions.” The chapter is presented as two monologues, each presented as a discrete whole, as opposed to with any cutting between them. The first is by Adam Susan, and is in effect an extended version of the final beat of the abandoned script. It consists of Susan reflecting, in interior monologue, on the nature of his life as he approaches his headquarters, walking into the office past the Hitler salutes and ascending the elevator to his private chamber, where he communes with the computer Fate. He proclaims bluntly, “I believe in survival, in the destiny of the Nordic race. I believe in fascism.” He goes on to explain this, using the traditional fascist image of a set of bound twigs and the metaphor of “strength in unity” that it represents. “I will not hear talk of freedom,” Susan declares. “I will not hear talk of individual liberty. They are luxuries. I do not believe in luxuries. The war put paid to luxury. The war put paid to freedom.” 

Figure 573: Adam Susan, ensconced within
his lover, magnificently isolated. (Written by
Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd, from "Versions"
in Warrior #5, 1982)
Susan is, however, quick to point out that he does not allow himself the luxuries he denies others. “I sit here within my cage and I am but a servant,” he insists. He goes on to clarify that he loves and serves Fate, explaining, “I stand at the gates of her intellect and I am blinded by the light within. How stupid I must seem to her. How childlike and uncomprehending. Her soul is clean, untainted by the snares and ambiguities of emotion. She does not hate. She does not yearn. She is untouched by joy or sorrow. I worship her, though I am not worthy. I cherish the purity of her disdain. She does not respect me. She does not fear me. She does not love me.” The section ends with a gradual closeup of Susan’s face as he proclaims, “Fate… Fate… I love you,” and then a wide shot of him, alone and isolated with his computer lover/ruler.

Figure 574: V addresses Justice. (Written
by Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd,
from "Versions" in Warrior #5,
1982)
The second section is a monologue from V directed to the statue of Justice atop the Old Bailey - a statue that Susan stares at as he drives past at the start of his own monologue. V’s monologue takes the form of an imagined dialogue with Justice, with V filling in her dialogue. V explains to Justice that he once considered himself in love with her (“Please don’t think it was merely physical. I know you’re not that sort of girl,” he reassures her), but that he has since moved on to someone else. “What? V!,” he imagines Justice saying. “You have betrayed me for some harlot, some vain and pouting hussy with painted lips and a knowing smile.” But V retorts that it was in fact Justice’s own infidelity - her fling with “a man in uniform… with his armbands and jackboots!” 

Figure 575: V destroys another
London landmark. (Written by
Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd,
from "Versions" in Warrior #5, 1982)
“You are no longer my Justice. You are his Justice now,” V proclaims, and says that he too has another mistress. “Her name is Anarchy,” he says, “and she has taught me more as a mistress than you ever did! She has taught me that justice is meaningless without freedom.” Justice, on the other hand, he dismisses as a “Jezebel” and sneers, “I used to wonder why you could never look me in the eye. Now I know.” And so V departs, leaving his former lover “a final gift,” a heart-shaped box he leaves at her feet before walking away, at which point, as is wont to happen with V, the box spectacularly explodes, destroying the statue of Justice. “The flames of freedom. How lovely. How just,” V muses as he looks back at his handiwork. 

Figure 576: The transition between the two eponymous versions. (Written
by Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd, from "Versions" in Warrior #5, 1982)
For all that this is markedly different from the abandoned script, there are similarities. For one thing, “Versions” ends with a one-page epilogue of Eric Finch trying to question the seemingly hopelessly insane Louis Prothero about V that is, with only a few minor changes to the dialogue, the first page of the abandoned “Violence” script. More substantively, however, both “Versions” and the unused “Violence” are based on the use of two parallel scenes, one of V and the other of the fascist regime. But where “Violence” cut back and forth between the two scenes several times, “Versions” keeps the two strands separate, having them meet in the chapter’s third page, in which the first four panels are devoted to the tail end of Adam Susan’s version, the last four to V’s, and the middle panel to an establishing shot of the Old Bailey. It is, in other words, an altogether more rigid structure, and marks the first of many times in Moore’s career that he turns to a formalism to help him with a misbehaving script. 

The more rigid structure, along with the title and declaration of each monologue as “first version” and “second version” puts considerably greater emphasis on the idea of V and Susan as representing contrasting visions of the world. But this gets at the more significant difference between “Versions” and “Violence,” which is that where “Violence” contrasted V and the fascists on the basis of their tactics, “Versions” contrasts them on a more fundamental philosophical level. And for all that the comic is clearly on V’s side, it goes out of its way to present Susan’s position, if not quite sympathetically, at least credibly. Moore has talked on several occasions about the effort he put into writing the fascist characters, and specifically about how this evolved over the course of working on the series, talking about how “I’d look at a character who I’d previously seen as a one-dimensional Nazi baddy and suddenly realize that he or she would have thoughts and opinions the same as everyone else,” and about how, for all that fascists were in practice his real-life political enemies, “in fact fascists are people who work in factories, probably are nice to their kids, it's just that they're fascists. They're just ordinary.” [continued]

Reviews (December 17th, 2014)

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So, just reviews this week, because I want to open with music, as Seeming has a new album out called Silent DiscoVery, so let's start with that.

It's a discipline worth maintaining, I increasingly feel, to remain aggressively plugged into the rhythms and promotional cycle of pop media. Television and comics both work well for this, but given that the entire rhetoric of "pop media" comes from music, one really ought to have at least one. For me, it's Seeming, for a variety of reasons. Yes, Alex is a dear friend, and Aaron's a lovely bloke as well. Yes, it really does help with the "stay plugged into the immense nowness of pop" thing when Alex sends you a new demo every couple of weeks. (I've been rocking out to the lead single off the next release for months now.)

Also, I love it. I just unabashedly fucking love the stuff Alex is doing right now, and I want everybody to listen to it. It's at once well plugged in to current pop culture concerns (it's a wonderful time for eschatology and utopian nihilism) and vibrantly idiosyncratic. So, new album, very exciting, let's talk about what it says.

Silent DiscoVery is the outtakes album from his brilliant Madness and Extinction. If you've not bought or at least listened to that album, please do. It's streaming free on Bandcamp here. It's worth checking out. And if you've not listened to it... well, Silent DiscoVery isn't necessarily the place to start, although it's worth checking out some of the songs.

But that's outtakes albums for you - their entire conceit, in the end, is that they're the stuff that didn't quite work on the album proper. That doesn't mean not good enough, certainly. But every track on an outtakes album, by its very existence, opens up a fan debate on "was this rightly excluded from the album?" Tellingly, the answer, for all ten of these songs, is "because they were great ideas that belonged on a different album" and not "because they weren't good enough."

So, for instance, the first track, "Everything," is a great song. Brilliant, sweeping, epic, all sorts of fun. Only problem is that it's not quite as good as "Everything Could Change," and the two songs not only have similar titles, they have musically similar endings, and you just can't put both of them on the same album. So to the outtake pile this gem goes. (I've been loving the line "do you see your reflection when my glass is dark" for years, though actually, at the time of writing, it's "did you know birds and metal outlive the likes of you" that's stuck on a loop in my head.)

Elsewhere you've got "Bayonet," which is a great song for Alex's previous band, ThouShaltNot, but that flounders ever so slightly as a Seeming song. And "Name Those Stars," a peppy little number with a synth line that sounds uncannily like the bass hook from John Linnell's "South Carolina," and that, perhaps more importantly, is just a little too peppy and too upbeat for an album called Madness and Extinction.

The marquee track is undoubtedly "Silent Disco," which has been clacking around for a while, and which already saw release as a single (backed by a glorious Tori Amos cover and a fun extended mix of "The Burial"). It's one of two tracks you can fairly accuse of being jokes (the other, "Which House?" isn't even arguable at this point), with the entire song built around a gloriously bad pun ("disco[nnect]"), but is a ruthless earworm in its own right.

For me, though, the standout tracks are "Muscle Memory," a song I've known for years, and that actually played an absolutely massive role in the development of the Nintendo Project, and "Party to Say Goodbye," a roaring anthem of adolescent terror.

With almost all of these, it's easy to see why they didn't make Madness and Extinction, an album that, from its title on, is pretty unrelenting in its aesthetic vision. And so it's nice to see Seeming carve out a larger account of what it is and what it can do as a band - one that includes more than unrelenting apocalypse parties. And perhaps more importantly, it's worth seeing what the rock that Madness and Extinction was chiseled out of consisted of - what other things that album could have been.

Like any good outtakes album, I guarantee you one of your favorite songs by the band will be on it somewhere. If you liked Madness and Extinction, this is a must-by. And if you didn't get around to it, well, go check it out, and maybe click through on this one and give "Party to Say Goodbye,""Muscle Memory," and "Everything" a spin. Frankly, even if Madness and Extinction wasn't your cup of tea, there's enough secret histories of the album and the band here to entice, and you should still give it a spin.

On to the week's comics. As ever, from worst to best, with everything being something I willingly, if not entirely sanely, paid money for.

Miles Morales: The Ultimate Spider-Man #8

So, I want to say, this is a perfectly self-consistent creative decision on Bendis's part. He's been doing this style of retcon issue for ages. He's good at it. It's part of what he does. All the same, my reaction to this comic is one of immense and overwhelming irritation. The "next" tagline on issue #7 was "all of the cards on all of the tables." This issue is nineteen pages of flashback featuring Miles's father, a final page that's the only place the title character appears, and a cliffhanger promising more revelations next month. All of this for $3.99. Which I do feel obliged to highlight, because twenty cents a story page is not a reasonable price point for an ostentatiously decompressed retcon that blatantly doesn't deliver on the promise advertised last month. (Note that the biggest revelation in #7, that Kate Bishop's entire family is Hydra, isn't even touched in this.) I'm angry at this comic. I feel ripped off. I feel like this isn't a fair or reasonable value for money, and like Bendis's style, well-honed as it is, is simply fundamentally inappropriate for a story solicited and priced like this.

Annihilator #4

Man, this is one of my least favorite Grant Morrison comics in years. Also, the entire sci-fi plot is blatantly just The Book of Urizen with the serial numbers filed off. "Vada organizes, Vada imitates! Nomax creates!" Indeed.

Moon Knight #10

I have a fundamental irritation with comics that set up tremendously compelling moral cases for their villains before shrugging and saying "yeah, but extrajudicial assassinations that don't support American power can't possibly be the sort of thing good guys do" and moving on to something much less interesting.

Guardians of the Galaxy #22

Two issues into the "Planet of the Symbiotes" arc, there is no actual Planet of the Symbiotes in sight.

Fables #147

The fact that Bill Willingham's basic worldview is morally repugnant to me is increasingly clearly going to be a major issue in how this resolves. "This is a lovely dream, but it's a hild's dream. I know some who'd argue the point, but I grew up long ago." What an absolutely awful thing to say in the context of a book about fairy tales.

Wytches #3

Ironically, given the five books below this in the rankings, I'll be dropping this, as it's just not grabbing me. It's well put together and I see the appeal, but Jock's art style, though very good at what it does, makes the basic storytelling here quite rough for me, and between that and the "more questions than answers" storytelling style, I just find the individual issues here to take a lot of energy and investment without actually giving much in return.

Captain America and the Mighty Avengers #2

This failed to pull a few weeks ago when it came out. The decision to focus on the non-inverted characters here made this much better than the rough start the book had at first, but man, I look forward to Axis being over.

Captain Marvel #10

Neat conceit and style to this - an issue focused on the earth-based side cast of the title, who have been neglected for eight issues as this went with being a space book instead. I really enjoyed this, which is good, as this book was starting to become a reliable let-down for me.

All-New X-Men #34

It feels like this arc has been going on forever, but this is a good issue of it. Love the Jean Grey meets Jean Grey bits. Not sure why there were pages of this comic focused on anything other than that, actually. But I had quite a bit of fun with this, even if, writing it up a few hours after I read it, the details are already rapidly sliding from my mind.

Multiversity: Thunderworld Adventures

I'd just claim it as the best Shazam comic since Jeff Smith, but the level of competition for that title is so abysmally low that I don't really think it would successfully communicate the charm of this. I just read some of the earliest Captain Marvel stuff as background research for Last War in Albion, and so this was a welcome treat. A real delight of a comic. There are many weeks where this and any of the four ahead of it would straightforwardly be my number one - hell of a good week, this one.

The Sandman Overture #4

You know, "the father of the Endless" sounds like it should be an outright disaster of a concept, but it manages to work. Williams is in absolutely screamingly good form here, and Gaiman's story is starting to come into enough focus to feel like there's actually a point to the exercise. Which, to be fair, you could always accuse Sandman of being a comic built for the trade, so there's form here. There are numerous irritations in this book's meandering release - a "wait for the trade" pace coupled with issues coming out months late is genuinely frustrating. But I have to admit, reading this, that I didn't care about any of that and was just having a lovely time.

Stumptown #4

Brilliant issue of this, with everything you want from this sort of Rucka book. Great character moments, an unquestionably noble and unquestionably flawed protagonist, and the US soccer fandom texture continues to have a wonderful vibrancy to it. Good fun.

The Wicked and the Divine #6

It's back! It's brilliant! Innana's a great character, but it's the flashback scene with the asshole snob fan that really makes it. I think "I'm not sure whether there's any chance of this being a vintage pantheon like in the 1920s or 1640s" may be one of my favorite lines of all time, simply for all the careful layers of parody involved. It starts to become very clear where this comic is going, most obviously in the line "I know I have this thing inside me, but however hard I work it just won't come out." Like, there's Laura's entire remaining character arc in one line, ennit? Some great texture on the bedroom page as well (glad to see them going back to this technique), although I will probably go to my grave wondering if the L was deliberately omitted from the diagram. (Nah, I bet Gillen will explain in the writer's notes, actually.)

Ms. Marvel #10

I love when these two books come out on the same week, because it means I spend half an hour rereading one, then the other trying to decide who the winner is. I feel like I give it to Ms. Marvel more often than I give it to WicDiv, although I think that's probably just me overcorrecting - I'd say WicDiv is the better book, or, at least, the one I'm more invested in. But this really charmed me - both in how well I remembered the plot details two months after the last issue, and in its general approach. I read a Gillen interview recently where he bemoaned the fact that Marvel isn't willing to let the teen heroes be right and the mainstay adult heroes be wrong very often. Well, here's G. Willow Wilson getting that perfectly right, with a kind of beautiful "the kids are all right" vibe. Yes, the critique of youth is a ridiculous strawman, but there's an absolutely gorgeous ridiculousness to it. This may be my favorite villain scheme in recent memory, actually, just for the way it mixes being completely bonkers with a spot-on ideology.

The Green One and the Not-Green One (The Crimson Horror)

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I don't know that I'd call it a crimson horror, really. Really, it's
more a rosy horror. Incarnadine horror at best.
It’s May 4th, 2013. Daft Punk have gotten lucky and made it to number one. Calvin Harris, Nelly, Macklemore, and, in a stunning feat of horror, will.i.am and Justin Bieber also chart. In news, James McCormick is jailed for ten years for selling fake bomb detectors, Labour and UKIP do well in local elections, and three more people are arrested over the Boston Marathon bombings. 

On television, meanwhile, The Crimson Horror, which is very possibly the most self-evident pairing of writer and concept in the history of Doctor Who. More than hiring David Whitaker to handle introducing a new Doctor over a backdrop of Daleks, more than giving Paul Cornell the small and personal story in the debut series, more even than giving Malcolm Hulke the giant lizards story, tapping Mark Gatiss to write the Victorian penny dreadful is simply a case of hiring a man to do what he’s good at. 

And correspondingly, in many regards The Crimson Horror is exactly what you’d expect. A ranting villain, a classic Doctor Who plot, broad gags. But as with Cold War, the details on this are all spot on. Yes, you’ve got a standard issue raving lunatic Doctor Who villain, but she’s played by Diana Rigg, whose appetite for scenery is gloriously boundless. (Surely there’s not a single person on the planet who does not love the line “the wrong hands.”) Strax irrevocably hits the “one note joke” point here, yes, but he also has his best gag with “horse, you have failed in your mission,” and to be fair, the bit where Vastra sends him outside because he’s gotten overexcited is, in fact, a new trick for the character, even if it’s basically the last one he ever gets. Neve McIntosh relishes getting to be the Doctor for a large swath of the story. The period stuff all looks great. And there are some lovely directorial flourishes, most notably the grainy film look used for the Doctor’s flashback exposition of how he got captured. 

And, yes, Gatiss deserves some specific praise here. This is not necessarily a story that’s long on logic, but everything moves along gracefully by dint of the fact that all the elements just go well together. And that speaks to a slyly good sense of judgment on Gatiss’s part. There’s no obvious reason why bright red bodies, the eyes of the dead holding images, Diana Rigg ranting, and Victorian finery should magically click together so as to make a coherent story in the absence of any significant plot logic, but they absolutely do. The Crimson Horror was never a contender for season-best, but it was tremendous fun when it aired - much more fun than you’d expect given that it seems like it should be very standard issue.

Indeed, this is the first story of Season 7B to be almost completely unfazed by the passage of more than a year since it aired. This is much as it was in May of 2013 - a story that’s almost ruthlessly straightforward. Part of this is that it’s the one story in Season 7B that you really can’t call the definitive take on its iconography. With The Snowmen just a few months prior and The Name of the Doctor two weeks after, the Victorian caper with the Paternoster Gang is a relatively standard part of this phase of the program’s tricks, and The Crimson Horror in many regards is less a definitive take than it is a solid execution of a formula - what Fury from the Deep is to bases under siege, and The Pyramids of Mars is to long dead foes threatening to return. The Victorian-era story featuring the Paternoster Gang is, if not quite the default mode of Doctor Who in this period, at least very close to it. 

We might fairly ask, however, how it is that a married lesbian inter-species couple and their Sontaran butler became a standard issue component of Doctor Who for a period. Well, no, actually, how is easy enough. Because Vastra, Jenny, and Strax stole every scene of A Good Man Goes to War that they were in, and Moffat has always been abnormally willing to trust the audience’s ability to accept sci-fi concepts. With all three characters having fairly straightforward high concept descriptions and being reasonably funny, it’s not hard to see how they ended up working. 

No, the real question is why Doctor Who suddenly decided to have the bulk of its standing support cast be aliens in Victorian London and not the contemporary Earth people that had previously been standard. Certainly some of it is that there was some real desire for change in this regard. Moffat had, after all, been seriously considering making Clara be a Victorian-era companion. Indeed, in many ways the easiest explanation is simply that the Paternoster Gang was always planned to feature heavily in Season 7B, and that after Clara was changed to no longer be a Victorian-era companion nobody went to change it back. (Although it’s worth stressing that The Crimson Horror was added after Clara was de-Victorianed, which means that it’s not just that the Paternoster Gang was kept around, but that their presence was actively increased.) 

But the appearance of the Maitland children at the end highlights another aspect of this, which is that Clara’s home life has been almost entirely ignored since The Bells of Saint John (and continues to be basically irrelevant until The Time of the Doctor). This is in many ways necessary for the Impossible Girl arc to function - if Clara had too much of a supporting cast, it would be too easy to focus on her instead of getting distracted by the mystery surrounding her. By moving the supporting cast into another time period (one that is, as we noted back in The Snowmen, still very easy to quickly sketch within the context of British television), Moffat gets all the benefits of a standing support cast without actually having them flesh Clara out prematurely and undermine his season-long shell game. 

This also helps explain both why The Crimson Horror exists, and why it breaks from the “definitive take” ethos of the rest of its season. It arguably is the definitive take on “Doctor Who does the penny dreadful,” but given that it invokes both six stories prior and two stories after, it never really gives the sense of being a stand-alone piece. It’s the one where the movie poster approach seems most off (not least because the movie poster plays up Clara and the Doctor while not mentioning the Paternoster Gang). But that’s because it’s not self-contained. Its job is to help establish recurring characters as a basic part of what the series can do, and to give the Paternoster Gang a story where they can function on their own terms, without having to tie in to a big event. In this regard, it’s disappointing that this isn’t the Doctor lite episode that one might have assumed from the setup. It’s fair to point out that most of its innovative ideas come in its first fifteen minutes, and that once he shows up and does his flashback bit, the story becomes considerably more standard issue - although Diana Rigg keeps things going at a nice clip. 

Actually, the bit where the Doctor shows up is worth talking about, simply because if I don’t, someone will bring it up anyway. It is, after all, the sequence during which the Doctor attempts to kiss Jenny, or, if you prefer the description of Moffat’s most adamant critics, the scene where he sexually assaults her. This is the sort of thing that one wants to equivocate on rather a lot. I will admit that I find the description of the scene as “sexual assault” somewhat forced. It’s not, and really I only disclaim this because otherwise some idiot is going to use the lack of disclaimer against me, that aggressively kissing somebody without consent isn’t sexual assault. It is. But here the fact that this is a work of fiction starts to play in and become relevant. There’s much to say about popular culture’s poor depictions of consent, but the spontaneous kiss is such an ingrained part of television and film that it seems more than faintly ridiculous to attempt to get a single moment of a single episode of Doctor Who to bear all or most of the weight of the numerous problems with our narrative shorthands for romance and sexuality. 

Beyond that, it’s not like the kiss is presented as acceptable. Jenny slaps the Doctor for it, in a way that makes it quite clear that this is misbehavior on his part. To describe it as “the Doctor sexually assaults Jenny” is blatantly to pick the most inflammatory phrasing possible, and feels like co-opting the reality of sexual assault for the purposes of scoring cheap points when arguing about television on the Internet. 

But that doesn’t mean that the scene isn’t troubling. And it’s especially troubling in light of Matt Smith’s later improvisation of a sonic screwdriver/erection sight gag when Jenny tears off her period garb to reveal her leather catsuit. The problem is that, especially taken together, they start to give a strong sense that Jenny is sexualized for a male gaze, which is not a great move when dealing with one of the two most prominent lesbian characters in the series’ history. Jenny and Vastra are played for plenty of laughs, but the joke is usually either about foolish people who don’t understand them or about the charming comfort and confidence they have with each other. Here, though, the joke is “aren’t attractive lesbians great.” 

The irony that this should happen in the one Paternoster episode not written by a heterosexual male is, of course, considerable. Although in practice it seems the blame for this mostly goes to Smith (although both Stewart and Metzstein should have, in both cases, resisted Smith’s idea), it’s hard not to note that Gatiss, in six (now seven) Doctor Who stories, has only ever created four major female characters in the supporting cast (Gwyneth, the Wire, Ada, and Mrs. Gillyflower are the only four to get a significant number of lines or scenes), and that Ada is the first one ever to actually survive the episode. So to see the one episode where Gatiss seems particularly interested in writing about half of his species run into problems like this is frustrating, and the fact that people who spend a lot of time being wrong on the Internet have inflated that objection into something far bigger than it deserves to be (and seem intent on mostly blaming Moffat for it) doesn’t actually mean that there isn’t a problem here.

Speaking of things that I pretty much have to mention and make some comment on, there’s also the two lines of Blake’s “Jerusalem” that are sung early in the episode. Very well: given that Parry didn’t set “Jerusalem” to music until 1916, its appearance in an episode set in 1893 is somewhat strange. But then again, that’s probably the sort of thing that happens if you do something like decide to make a poem by William Blake your de facto national anthem. 

This also marks the last time we’re going to talk about Mark Gatiss in the course of TARDIS Eruditorum, and that’s probably worth remarking on, simply because he’s a figure that I’ve given, at various times, something of a rough ride to, and someone I think, on the whole, I’ve probably been a bit too rough on. (Ignoring Nightshade, for instance, was just rude of me.) And, I mean, I’m not going to pretend it’s not understandable why that’s happened. Gatiss is, if not responsible, at least the guy with the writing credit on some spectacularly shit episodes. And there are ways in which Gatiss’s style contributes to that. He’s far from the most ambitious of writers, and if you’re the sort of person who has been writing about Doctor Who 2-3 times a week for the past three years and thinking about it literally every day, that really is a major problem. As I’ve said, after three years of writing TARDIS Eruditorum, there’s nothing I want out of Doctor Who quite so much as something I’ve never seen before, and that’s the last thing Gatiss is likely to serve up. 


And yet for all of that, having watched every single episode of Doctor Who within the last three years, I find myself with a strange respect for Mark Gatiss. There is nobody who has done more in terms of curating the past of Doctor Who than any other writer on the new series. And for Gatiss, that curation goes far beyond just remembering the good episodes, or throwing in continuity references. Gatiss remembers scenes and images - the texture of episodes, rather than their content. As we close in on the end of the 50th Anniversary year, that seems worth remembering and, more to the point, tipping our hat to. Even if his episodes aren’t the most exciting of the bunch, they are the ones that, I think, most thoroughly and truly honor the history of the series. That’s worth more credit than I’ve given him. It really is.

Saturday Waffling (December 20th, 2014)

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What do you think is going to happen in Last Christmas?

This is Philip Sandifer: Writer, currently featuring TARDIS Eruditorum and The Last War in Albion

I am currently working on: the secret Doctor Who project.

Post of the week: Reviews (December 17th, 2014)

Some Mercury Left Over (Nightmare in Silver)

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Figure Who Even Knows: Matt Smith's Doctor Who faces down
himself with a facial prosthesis in front of a menacing green screen
projection.
This is an excerpt from a future chapter of The Last War in Albion, the precise placement of which remains ambiguous. Think of it as our “The Yesterday Gambit." 

Previously in The Last War in Albion: At the same time that Gaiman was working on The Ocean at the End of the Lane, he was also writing his second Doctor Who story, Nightmare in Silver, where he brought back the Cybermen, the very same monsters that featured in Black Legacy, Alan Moore’s first professional publication as a writer, and that Grant Morrison had employed in his early-career Doctor Who Magazine work…

“Dreams!! Visions!! We are Cybermen, Medic… we do not run from shadows!” - Alan Moore, “Black Legacy”

Gaiman had considerably more affection for Doctor Who than either Morrison or Moore (who was known to suggest that all of the actors to play the part after William Hartnell made Doctor Who seem like a pedophile). And so it is not, in this case, his mentor’s take that he turned to, but rather his own memories of the Cybermen from childhood. Indeed, they were the series’ iconic monsters for the period when The Ocean at the End of the Lane is set, due to some curiosities with the rights to the show’s usual iconic foe, the Daleks, which meant that Doctor Who couldn’t use them for several years. Gaiman’s seventh birthday fell on November 10th, 1967, two months into Patrick Troughton’s second season as Doctor Who, a season that both opened and closed with a Cyberman story, and the book’s main action takes place during the season’s penultimate story. 

Indeed, this is much of why Gaiman returned to the program to do a second episode, as there was little reason for him to otherwise. The BBC’s pay was, by his standards, meager, especially for the amount of time The Doctor’s Wife took. But that script had been one of the highlights of his career over the previous few years, winning him a Hugo Award and considerable acclaim. He’d had, for that story, a rare thing in one’s career - an editor who was as skilled a writer as he was, and the collaboration had sparked him to heights that his late career work had not consistently attained. But most of all, Moffat dared him to “make the Cybermen scary again,” and he couldn’t resist it.

Unfortunately, perhaps because Gaiman had time for fewer drafts, perhaps because Moffat was too occupied with other projects to edit as extensively, Nightmare in Silver harkens back to mediocrities like 1602 and Whatever Happened to the Caped Crusader in which Gaiman offers a fairly hollow riff on pop culture nostalgia. Where The Doctor’s Wife had been progressively refined at Moffat’s urging to give more weight to its most interesting idea - Doctor Who being able to communicate verbally with his Tardis - Nightmare in Silver never settles down on one particularly interesting idea about the Cybermen. It is instead a series of visual set pieces: Cybermen moving with Wachowski/Snyder-stylized superspeed, or a rusting shell of a Cyberman used as the outer shell of a chess-playing mechanical Turk. It throws in several homages to Troughton-era Cybermen stories: a section of bouncing around on a stylized lunar landscape serves as an obvious homage to Troughton’s fourth story, The Moonbase, while a scene of the Cybermen bursting form “tombs” is a visual quotation of The Tomb of the Cybermen, which aired two months prior to the start of The Ocean at the End of the Lane. But as an episode of Doctor Who, it is a flatter and far weaker thing than The Doctor’s Wife.

Nevertheless, it serves as a sort of secret cousin to The Ocean at the End of the Lane. Indeed, Gaiman admits that “they were being written at the same time and I had the same stuff going on,” with the first and second drafts of the script being written on either side of the novel. This connection is not necessarily immediately obvious based on the transmitted episode, which differed significantly from Gaiman’s original ideas. Gaiman has admitted that while “I got 95, 96, 97 per cent of what I wanted” when writing The Doctor’s Wife, when it came to Nightmare in Silver, “a lot of the things I wanted didn’t really happen.” Some of these were simply budgetary issues - his proposal for a scene in which a host of Cybermen are killed via an electrified moat was intended to be massive in scale, with “1,000 dead cybermen in [the moat] and 100,000 marching over them,” an ambition that was unsurprisingly scaled back in the face of the realities of Doctor Who’s infamously small budgets. Gaiman had also called for the Cybermen to be completely silent, recalling how he found the 1960s Cybermen much scarier than the Daleks “because they were quiet, and they slipped in and out of rooms,” only to have this detail scrapped in favor of them being metallic stompers in the vein of what Gaiman described as the “clanky clanky steampunk Cybermen” that the series had been using since 2006.

Gaiman also notes that he wrote “long emails… explaining what made the old Cybermen scary,” in which he talked about how the Cybermen had drifted away from their original concept as designed in 1966 (one year before The Ocean at the End of the Lane) by Kit Pedler and Gerry Davis. As Gaiman explains, when they created the Cybermen, “heart transplants were just about to start… people thought it was threatening and weird that you could have pacemakers or artificial limbs.” For Gaiman, this was closely related to the slightly later concept of the uncanny valley, a term first coined by Japanese roboticist Masahiro Mori in 1970, which talked about the way in which increasing the realism of a mechanical representation of humanity makes it more and more disturbing. But the redesigned Cybermen of Nightmare in Silver were relatively far from this - Gaiman notes that he was “very pleased with the face” on the new models, but that “the body wasn’t quite what I expected - it was more Iron Man.” 

But perhaps the most revealing change is one of setting. Gaiman’s original script called for the Cybermen to attack an English seaside fairground, which is to say, to have them attack a place not unlike Portsmouth. Indeed, the iconography initially described, of Cybermen stepping out onto a pebble-strewn beach, sounds not entirely unlike the Cybermen invadingMr. Punch. As with his moat full of a thousand Cybermen corpses with a hundred thousand more marching atop them, however, this proved outside the reach of the BBC budget, and so the action was moved to a dilapidated space amusement park, an attempt at the same Victoriana in space aesthetic that had worked so well in The Doctor’s Wife. 

It is difficult to imagine that the change was particularly harmful to the story, but it nevertheless highlights what Gaiman was trying to invoke. While on one hand grappling with the nature and shape of his own childhood fear, he was on the other trying to reshape a classic bit of British popular culture from the same period into a form that would invoke the same fear it did in him for a new generation. Like The Ocean at the End of the Lane, Nightmare in Silver is an attempt to depict and recreate the fears and anxieties of his own childhood. In this regard, it’s telling that his original draft focused more on two supporting characters, children under the care of Doctor Who’s then-companion, Jenna Coleman’s Clara Oswald, but that revisions to Clara’s basic character that changed her from a Victorian governess to a contemporary twenty-something de-emphasized this. As Gaiman describes it, “originally the companion in that script was called Beryl. She was a Victorian governess in charge of two kids. Beryl was a Mary Poppins figure, so the idea was to have a kind of Mary Poppins adventure. When Steven changed that plan and Beryl became Clara, I said, ‘Hang on, I’ve started writing the Victorian one.’ He was like, ‘It’s fine, she looks after two kids anyway.” (It is worth pointing out that Mary Poppins was also featuring, more or less contemporaneously, in the final volume of Alan Moore and Kevin O’Neill’s League of Extraordinary Gentlemen: Century, which came out in June of 2012, while Gaiman was working on the script for Nightmare in Silver.) But although the two kids were still available, this change altered the emphasis of the story - Gaiman notes that they “had less import and impact than in the original script,” which in turn moved the script away from the childhood horror that was at the heart of its original appeal to Gaiman.

But there were other factors that caused trouble for Gaiman’s story. One is that, as Gaiman notes, the fears invoked by the Cybermen in the 1960s were culturally specific. Gaiman himself notes, regarding the original fear of artificial hearts, that the fear has largely faded, commenting that while he’d employed that body horror in The Doctor’s Wife, “last year I met a really nice model whose legs had been amputated. She’d become an athlete. She had carbon-fibre sprung legs designed to run with. She doesn’t wear high heels if she wants to look taller, she wears different legs. It’s not that we lose our humanity, it’s more, ‘We’re human, we can do this…’” Instead he tried to base the Cybermen’s terror on contemporary technology, saying that “the scariest thing now is that they’re all in touch. They’re plugged into the web and we’re not” - a fear echoed in the script with the idea of the Cyberiad, which seems to be a sort of Cybermen computing cloud. But this meant that Gaiman’s script was stuck trying to have it both ways, simultaneously trying to bring the specific fears the Cybermen evoked in 1967 and trying to base them in a technological milieu that didn’t exist then. The result is unsurprisingly muddy.

Gaiman’s script was also hampered by the borderline incompetent direction offered by Stephen Woolfenden. Woolfenden’s camerawork is neadlessly leaden, with sequences taking place inside Doctor Who’s mind as he tries to repel the Cybermen’s attempt to convert him being particularly drab. These sequences consist of Matt Smith acting opposite himself only with a small facial prosthesis, with sides of the conversation being portrayed by banal shot-reverse-shot cuts of Matt Smith, blatantly in front of a green screen. Smith turns in a spirited performance as a ranting Doctor Who villain, but the sequences hardly come off. 

More broadly, however, Woolfenden seems to have simply failed to understand Gaiman’s script. Admittedly much of the personal childhood connection was eroded in development, and one can fairly question whether those aspects of the script would ever have been entirely effective on an audience that wasn’t Neil Gaiman, but Woolfenden’s direction does not appear to grasp that the script is fundamentally about a childhood view of the Cybermen, shooting them as a fairly generic robotic monster and seemingly believing that the most interesting things Gaiman adds to the concept are slow-motion and bits like a Cyberman quickly pivoting to shoot someone who was trying to sneak up behind it. It’s not just the ignoring of Gaiman’s direction that the Cybermen should be silent, but the fact that Woolfenden is directing an episode about an army of robots, while Gaiman is writing a story about the monster under the bed and spaces of childhood wonder turning rotten and terrifying. The image of Clara and a ragtag band of half-competent soldiers trying to weather a Cybermen siege from within Natty Longshoe’s Comical Castle should be a disturbing nightmare of a slumber party gone wrong - instead, despite the beautiful exchange in which Clara asks, “real castle? Drawbridge? Moat?” and gets the wry answer, “yes, but comical,” the entire thing is basically shot as space marines fighting Cybermen in a castle.


The result is arguably one of the worst missteps of Gaiman’s career - for all the acclaim that The Doctor’s Wife got (and it’s ironic that Gaiman announced his impending return to the program while accepting his Hugo Award for The Doctor’s Wife, saying that “only a fool or a madman would try again” following the success of his first effort), Nightmare in Silver quickly attained a reputation as a somewhat infamous turkey, coming in third from the bottom in a Doctor Who Magazine poll of 2013’s episodes. But nevertheless, beneath the surface of a mediocre television episode lies another story, lost to the depths of Lettie Hempstock’s ocean, that is in many ways the prototype of one of the absolute jewels of Gaiman’s later career. Indeed, it is not entirely unreasonable to suggest that The Ocean at the End of the Lane owes its conceptual existence to Gaiman’s engagement with Doctor Who as much as it does to his marriage to Amanda Palmer. [continued]

The Breaker of Rules (The Last War in Albion Part 76: This Vicious Cabaret)

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This is the fourth of fifteen parts of The Last War in Albion Chapter Nine, focusing on Alan Moore's work on V for Vendetta for Warrior (in effect, Books One and Two of the DC Comics collection). An omnibus of all fifteen parts can be purchased at Smashwords. If you purchased serialization via the Kickstarter, check your Kickstarter messages for a free download code.

The stories discussed in this chapter are currently available in a collected edition, along with the eventual completion of the story. UK-based readers can buy it here.

Previously in The Last War in AlbionOne of Moore's earliest formally experimental strips was the sixth chapter of V for Vendetta, "Versions," which consisted of two monologues, one by Adam Susan, the fascist leader of Great Britain, the other by V. This script was a replacement script after Moore and Lloyd decided that Moore's first effort, to be called "Violence," was not good enough.

"Nomax the Rebel! Nomax the Breaker of Rules!" - Grant Morrison, Annihilator

The more rigid structure, along with the title and declaration of each monologue as “first version” and “second version” puts considerably greater emphasis on the idea of V and Susan as representing contrasting visions of the world. But this gets at the more significant difference between “Versions” and “Violence,” which is that where “Violence” contrasted V and the fascists on the basis of their tactics, “Versions” contrasts them on a more fundamental philosophical level. And for all that the comic is clearly on V’s side, it goes out of its way to present Susan’s position, if not quite sympathetically, at least credibly. Moore has talked on several occasions about the effort he put into writing the fascist characters, and specifically about how this evolved over the course of working on the series, talking about how “I’d look at a character who I’d previously seen as a one-dimensional Nazi baddy and suddenly realize that he or she would have thoughts and opinions the same as everyone else,” and about how, for all that fascists were in practice his real-life political enemies, “in fact fascists are people who work in factories, probably are nice to their kids, it's just that they're fascists. They're just ordinary.”

In this regard, perhaps the most significant thing about “Versions” is the way in which it depicts, in effect, three possible choices. The first is Adam Susan’s embrace of Fate, which is on one level a literal object in the form of a computer, but on another is clearly meant to include the abstract concept, the notion that outcomes are pre-determined by some outside and higher power being fundamentally in line with the ideology of fascism. The second is Justice, who both V and (in V’s telling at least) Susan aspire towards, but which is also, ultimately, suggested to be a tool of fascism. And the third is V’s new mistress, Anarchy, who, as he puts it, “is honest. She makes no promises and breaks none.” The debate, in other words, is not even about the practical manifestations of anarchism or fascism as political ideologies, but one about the abstract values themselves, with V’s position being, in effect, that Anarchy, unlike Fate and Justice, cannot be corrupted. It is, in other words, specifically because Anarchy exists on an almost purely ideological level, with no materialist “promises,” that it is valued. This is a significant change from the original “Violence” script, which focused almost entirely on the pragmatics of the conflict between V and the fascists, and goes a long way towards answering David Lloyd’s longstanding curiosity as to “why Alan hadn’t met the exacting standards I knew he always expected from himself” on the unused chapter - because it represented, on Moore’s part, a fundamental misunderstanding of what his own comic was about, and it was not until he worked through that misunderstanding with “Versions” that he finally realized that V for Vendetta was not primarily a book about appropriate tactics of resistance, but rather a book about why resistance is valuable in the first place.

For all that Moore’s style evolves over the early installments of V for Vendetta, however, it remains the case that Book One is in many ways a simple and straightforward thing. This is perhaps inevitable. Moore only came to fully understand the comic over the course of writing Book One, after all. Nevertheless, the fact remains that Book One is in effect a fairly simple revenge plot focusing on the eponymous vendetta. It jumps around a couple of perspectives in a clever way, but in the end it’s just the tale of an anonymous vigilante killing a bunch of fascists, with a reveal of his origin story at the end. There are moments of real cleverness - the tenderness between V and his final victim, for instance, is surprising and genuinely unsettling, especially after the cruel yet thrilling poetic justice dished out to, for example, the Bishop of Westminster, who’s killed with a poisoned communion wafer that V challenges him to transubstantiate. And V’s origin, as a concentration camp survivor apparently driven mad by an experimental hormone-based treatment that killed the other forty-seven test subjects, is suitably chilling, playing off of the World War II origins of the superhero genre to which V for Vendetta is tacitly connected, but drawing from the darkest and most horrific parts of that iconography. But ultimately, for all that V talks about an underlying philosophy to his actions, Book One of the story is focused entirely on a personal vendetta, the nature of which is revealed in the telling, which makes it a somewhat self-absorbed narrative.

Figure 577: "This Vicious Cabaret" presented its narrative paralleled with
sheet music. (Written by Alan Moore and David J, art by David Lloyd,
from Warrior #12, 1983)
Book Two, however, which commenced with a prelude in Warrior #12, published in August of 1983, is an entirely different story. Where the first book was on the whole a straightforward action story, the second book is altogether more complex thing. This is clear from its opening section, entitled “This Vicious Cabaret,” and presented as a series of images of various characters as they left off at the end of the previous installment, juxtaposed with narration on V’s part in the form of a cabaret song, with sheet music for the vocal line, composed by Bauhaus’s bassist, David J. It’s an aggressively experimental opening, but in some ways its most radical aspect is clear only in implication. The structure of “This Vicious Cabaret” consists of windows on all of the major characters: Eric Finch, the “policeman with an honest soul that has seen whose head is on the pole” and who “grunts and fills his briar bowl with a feeling of unease,” Adam Susan, the “master in the dark nearby” who “inspects the hands with brutal eye that have never brushed a lover’s thigh but have squeezed a nation’s throat,” Evey, who “doubts her hosts moralities” but who “decides that she is more at ease in the land of doing-as-you-please than outside in the cold,” and, perhaps most significantly, Rose Almond, battered widow of the now late Derek Almond (killed by V in the climax of Book One), who the lyrics prophesize “will be dressed in garter and bow-tie and be taught to kick [her] legs up high in this vicious cabaret,” an addition that presages her becoming a significant character in a way that she was not in Book One.

Figure 578: The only panels in which V is straightforwardly the subject
in "This Vicious Cabaret" are extreme close-ups and shots that don't show
his face. (Written by Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd, from Warrior #12, 1983)
But in many ways the most notable thing about “This Vicious Cabaret” is the character who isn’t quite depicted, V himself. It’s not that V is absent from the chapter, but rather that he looms over it, appearing only as a pair of hands playing the piano, in tight close-ups on his mask, or in a series of panels in which he appears within a crowd scene and, eventually, adjusts one of the figures, revealing them all to be plastic dummies. This is an apt enough metaphor - although he’s the title character and ostensible protagonist, V spends this prelude markedly outside the world upon which he comments. In some ways this has always been true - V’s mysterious nature requires, after all, that the narrative never get too far into his head, and even Book One regularly opted to focus on other characters, which really is a sensible move when one considers that the title character has a completely static face and a habit of talking in quotes. 

Figure 579: Evey abandoned. (Written by Alan Moore, art
by David Lloyd, from Warrior #13, 1983)
But Book Two ultimately sidelines him even further. The first installment consists entirely of a conversation between V and Evey that culminates in V blindfolding Evey and leading her outside. This culminates in an elaborate sequence in which Lloyd’s panels draw ever closer on Evey, so that it’s impossible to tell what’s happening to her or where she’s being led, while a recorded voice begins reciting bits of dialogue from Book One, specifically the scenes in which Evey offers to help V, and later vows not to kill anymore. Eventually Evey removes the blindfold in frustration, discovering herself to be standing outside on a street, with V seemingly standing in the middle of the road a few feet away. But V, after reciting a bit of dialogue from Enid Blyton’s The Magic Faraway Tree and answering Evey’s earlier question as to whether he was her father (he denies it), turns out to not be V at all, but to just be a mask, hat, and cloak draped around a wooden stand with a tape recorder underneath, with the chapter ending on a wide shot of the street, Evey barely distinct in the midground asking, in tiny Jenny O’Connor letters, “V?”

Figure 580: Top - V inspects the movie poster for
The Salt Flats. (Written by Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd,
from "The Veil" in Warrior #14, 1983) Bottom - the logo for
The Spiral Path.
The second chapter, driven by an internal monologue on the part of Rose Almond at her late husband’s funeral, only features V in nine panels, in which he visits an old movie theater and takes a film poster for a film called The Salt Flats, which appears in every regard to be a perfectly ordinary film poster like many of the others that V has in the Shadow Gallery, although a handful of details like the fact that it was apparently nominated for Best Picture in 1986 (three years after the comic’s publication) and the fact that the film’s logo is curiously in the exact same font as another series appearing in Warrior, Steve Parkhouse’s The Spiral Path.

Figure 581: V presents an informational film to the British
public. (Written by Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd,
from "A Vocational Viewpoint," in Warrior #16, 1983)

The third and fourth installments are largely focused on V. The first, “Video,” is the aforementioned segment consisting almost entirely of dialogue from television broadcasts, in which V breaks into the broadcasting station and takes control of the television broadcast, while the second, “A Vocational Viewpoint,” consists entirely of the monologue V subsequently delivers to the people of England, telling them, “I’m not entirely satisfied with your performance lately… I’m afraid your work’s been slipping, and… well, I’m afraid we’ve been thinking of letting you go.” He reminisces about “the day you commenced your employment, swinging down from the trees, fresh-faced and nervous, a bone clasped in your bristling fist.” But, V complains, humanity has a “basic unwillingness to get on within the company. You don’t seem to want to face up to your real responsibility, or to be your own boss.” He allows that “the management is very bad” and that “we’ve had a string of embezzlers, frauds, liars and lunatics making a string of catastrophic decisions,” but even this he blames on the broad population who “appointed these people” and “who gave them the power to make decisions for you. While I’ll admit that anyone can make a mistake once, to go on making the same lethal errors century after century seems to me nothing short of deliberate.” And, V insists, humanity had a choice. “You could have stopped them. All you had to say was ‘no.’ You have no spine. You have no pride. You are no longer an asset to the company.” But, he says, he will nevertheless give people “two years to show me some improvement in your work” before armed guards finally burst into the room he’s broadcasting from and open fire on him, sending him toppling through a window to his apparent demise.

Figure 582: V did not make a substantive
appearance between December 1983 and
November 1988.
This bracing chapter serves two main purposes. The first is a more thorough statement of the book’s philosophical themes, which goes considerably further than “Versions,” the previous chapter to spell them out at any length. This, along with the shift in focus to include Rose Almond as one of the series’ primary characters, speaks to the way in which Moore was trying to broaden the sense of what V for Vendetta could do in the second book. The second is to give the main character an impressive send-off before he’s largely removed from the strip. The possibility that V has actually died is not entertained for long - the reader discovers in the next installment that the dead man is in fact Roger Dashcombe, the fascist regime’s minister of propaganda, and Rose Almond’s new lover following V’s murder of her husband. But save for a two panel, wordless appearance at the end of Chapter Six in which his face isn’t even shown and a four-page, completely wordless fill-in chapter drawn by Tony Weare instead of David Lloyd, V made no appearances between his apparent death in Warrior #16, published in December 1983 and the final page of the installment in Warrior #26, published in February 1985, where he appears unexpectedly in a final page splash. This was also the final issue of Warrior entirely, and V would not appear again until the final two installments of Book Two were published by DC in November 1988’s V for Vendetta #7, nearly five years after he essentially disappeared from his own strip.

Figure 583: Fascist cabaret dancing. (Written by Alan Moore,
art by David Lloyd, from "Variety" in Warrior #19, 1984)
The eight chapters between V’s broadcast and his re-emergence are for the most part focused on Evey, although Chapter Five opens with a four page section focusing on Eric Finch’s enforced vacation after he angrily decked Almond’s replacement on the Finger. The remaining two pages introduce a new character - a small time criminal named Gordon who, in the chapter’s final panels, turns out to be housing Evey, unseen since V abandoned her in a street four chapters earlier. The next few chapters focus on her life with Gordon up until he’s killed when a deal goes wrong and she is arrested trying to avenge him. The most interesting of these is probably Chapter Six, “Variety,” which takes place within The Kitty-Kat Keller, a gentleman’s club in which an unnamed dancer goose-steps to a fascist cabaret song (“So if some blonde and blue eyed boy / would care to teach me strength through joy / and see that all my liberal tendencies are cured; / if it should be decreed by fate / that you invade my neighbouring state / then you will find my frontiers open, rest assured.”) [continued]

Comics Reviews (December 24th, 2014)

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From worst to best, with everything something I willingly paid money for, if not wisely.

Also, as I am now more aware of my Christmas schedule, my Last Christmas review should manage to go up sometime tomorrow, and not, as previously expected, on Boxing Day. You can still back that at Patreon, as well as my Doctor Who in 2014 wrap-up post and, starting in January, coverage of Sherlock Season Three, just to fill the gap between the last Eruditorum and the start of the Capaldi reviews.

But now, comics.

The Massive #30

Thirty issues of my life I'll never get back.

All-New X-Men Annual #1

I'd hoped that this would cohere more in its second issue, but it didn't really. There's no sense in which this story needed two over-sized issues and $10 to tell, and it didn't benefit from being held back for months after the actual event in the comics. On the whole, kind of a mess.

Daredevil #11

New storyline. I think I've definitely hit the point of being a bit bored with Mark Waid on Daredevil. This is a perfectly serviceable "the sort of thing Mark Waid does on Daredevil" story, but it's increasingly clear he's gone through his best ideas and is on to the second tier of them.

Captain America and the Mighty Avengers #3

Woo! Axis is over! This book can actually get on with doing interesting stories now! This isn't bad, and has a good fight scene, to be fair.

Loki: Agent of Asgard #9

Loki wielding Thor's hammer is beautiful, but I have to say, this entire arc gets overshadowed by its cliffhanger. Still, this is the only Axis-related comic that's held my interest at all, and that deserves some credit. Was this the worst Marvel crossover in recent memory? I struggle to think of something quite this dire in a while. Given the one-two punch of Original Sin and this... well, at least I have hope for Secret Wars.

New Avengers #28

Hickman's finally gotten his eight months later pieces on the board how he wants them, it seems, and is now getting around to making interesting things happen. And this issue, while not necessarily full of interesting things, at least has some interesting things that happen in the final couple of pages.

Uncanny X-Men #29

Surprisingly eventful, with an absolutely fascinating state of play at the end of the issue. I'm excited to see where this goes, not least because of the teases for Cyclops's future offered by Hickman in Avengers.

Doctor Who: The Eleventh Doctor #6

I worried that the Rob Williams issues of this were going to be weaker than the Ewing issues, but this is a fantastic formal experiment that makes strong use of the structure of a comic book, and has a Nimon in it to boot. THE NIMON BE PRAISED.

Last Christmas Review

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Instant reaction has it with 76.88% at an 8-10, with an 8 being the most popular rating, which is pretty standard issue. And to be fair, its faults announce themselves somewhat forcefully. There's a bit of a pacing problem - the ten minutes or so after Santa wakes everybody up the first time and before the sleigh sequence are an entirely unnecessary bit of padding, and I found myself getting restless on first viewing. Second viewing was kinder, but also solidified my sense that there's a problem there. Yes, it resolves a few levels of the Inception pastiche, but it's not delivering any significant development, and mostly seems there to get a forty-five minute story to take an hour. Also, the "last Christmas" metaphor is a bit vapid, or, at least, seemingly missing a definite article. 
But the reason these problems seem so visible is because this story's chief virtue is its sheer level of confidence in what it's doing. Inception meets Alien, only with Santa Claus. The fact that Doctor Who is at a point where it can do that, for a mass Christmas audience with an unusually large number of non-fans, is genuinely impressive. And yet the episode just gets on with it, trusting that the individual components of this are all broad and high concept enough to work so long as you spend a little time establishing them. 

A corresponding part of this is also the confidence that they can do all of this. Here the virtue of casting Nick Frost really announces itself. He's a fantastic choice for Santa, or, at least, for Steven Moffat's Santa, which, as you'd expect, is mostly a series of jokes about how Santa is no harder to explain than anything else in Doctor Who. Frost's instincts on how serious to pitch the performance are spot on. But there's also a tremendous amount of confidence in the visuals. The sequence in which Santa arrives to save the day, with an army of toys marching into the polar base is flat out one of the maddest things Doctor Who has ever done, but there's not a trace of the program seeming embarrassed by this or worrying whether or not it can get away with it.

As a result, it pretty much does get away with everything. Even the obvious accusation that Moffat is recycling things, and he unabashedly is, seems silly here. It's difficult to imagine how the sentence "it's business as usual: Inception meets Alien, only with Santa Claus" would even seem like a sensible and coherent thing to say about Doctor Who only two years ago. That this feels like a completely organic and sensible thing for the show to be speaks volumes about the degree to which the program has become flexible and varied even by the standards of Doctor Who. Much of this gets into what I'll say in the Season Eight wrap-up post next week, but its nevertheless worth stressing just how much further Moffat has taken the idea that Doctor Who can do anything than previous writers.

To some extent, actually, that's what Last Christmas is about. It studiously explains all of the magic tricks, unapologetically making explicit the idea that Doctor Who stories are always dreams, or at least always work according to the logic and structure of dreams, which is indistinguishable from how television editing works. There are several points where the Doctor quietly switches from describing events to narrating the, explicitly marking the switches in mood in a way that blurs the line between cause and effect. And the existential dread of it is wonderfully cheeky - Doctor Who makes waking up from a nightmare scary. I mean, that's just beautiful, that is.

And then there's the ending. I don't mind as such that Clara is still around. It would be difficult for me to justify that position, really, given how fantastic she's been this season. Equally, there are obvious hurdles to overcome. If she stays through all of Season Nine, she'll set a new series record for most number of episodes for one companion. The change of Doctors after her first ten episodes helped her tremendously, but it's not entirely clear what else there is to do with the character at this point. Perhaps more significantly, we've now had, what, three separate stories where Clara has gotten a seeming ending? Four if you count Mummy on the Orient Express separately from Kill the Moon. After this many rough drafts of Clara's departure, one really starts to hope that Moffat has a spectacular idea he's been keeping in reserve for the actual one, when he does get to it.

But these are problems for another day. What we have here is a story about two best friends reconciling on Christmas in their own inimitable way, in a story that mixes classic base under siege thrills with Santa Claus and makes it all work. I've said before that my basic standard for an episode of Doctor Who is that I want something I haven't seen before. This certainly fit the bill. 
  • So, Paul Wilmshurst directed this, Kill the Moon, and Mummy on the Orient Express. That's a hell of a case for director of the year there, even with Ben Wheatley's impressive effort on the first two stories. What really stands out about Wilmshurst - and it was probably most highlighted in Mummy on the Orient Express where he had a writer with a similar skill - is his ability to introduce a concept. All three of his stories require quite a bit of setup time to explain their rules, and he makes those sequences lively while still quickly communicating everything that needs communicated. I really hope they don't immediately lose him to better paying work.
  • Notably, instead of a narrative substitution we have a sort of repeated and emphatic reiteration of the narrative. The cold open ends with what really is the key question of the story. The repeated waking out of dream states only serves to reiterate that this is the story it initially promised to be. It's a masterpiece of doing exactly what you said you were going to do and still making it surprising.
  • As this episode wrapped on Twitter, I saw the usually intelligent Laurie Penny with an immediate reaction complaining that it was sexist that the Doctor didn't consider taking the elderly Clara on the TARDIS, saying "Same reason he couldn't take Old Amy. Only young hot chicks allowed." I really wish feminist critics of Moffat's writing would stop being so completely idiotic. Yes, let's give our lead actress a several hour makeup job in the future. And take a companion too infirm to open a Christmas cracker. This is a perfectly reasonable expectation and thus something that makes a sensible objection when it doesn't happen. And never mind the fact that the episode includes the absolutely lovely scene of the Doctor being completely unable to tell she's aged. For god's sake. Have we really not progressed past the third year undergraduate realization that you can make a feminist critique of any text and to the useful and mature realization that this means that picking sensible and useful targets is important? Clearly not. Instead we've just declared Moffat an authorized punching bag against whom one should always raise a feminist critique with no regard for whether or not it's a particularly good one. Ugh.
  • The dance sequence to Slade stole the episode. Absolutely perfect. Other highlights: the series of spurious "that's racist" gags that lead up to the actually quite reasonable point that naming a horror movie Alien says little good about us, Shona's to-do list for Christmas (including a clear sign that my intent to do Game of Thrones reviews is sound), "magic carrots," the reappearance of the "helping the old person open the Christmas cracker,""you're a dream that's trying to save us," and basically everything else to do with Shona. 
  • I'm going to do a final ranking for 2014 in the end of season post, so instead, a ranking of Christmas specials, from best to worst.
  1. Time of the Doctor
  2. A Christmas Carol
  3. The Christmas Invasion
  4. Last Christmas
  5. The End of Time
  6. The Snowmen
  7. The Runaway Bride
  8. The Doctor, The Widow, and the Wardrobe
  9. Voyage of the Damned
  10. The Next Doctor

The Second Annual "I Hope You Enjoy That E-Reader You Got For Christmas" Sale

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Eruditorum will run tomorrow. Today, it's time for the now traditional time when I celebrate the fact that surely some of you got things you can read ebooks on yesterday, and thus might conceivably want to spend money on my books by cutting the prices on them for the last week of the year. Here's what we've got this year. You just buy the books at Smashwords, use the coupon code at check out, and enjoy.

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Guest Post: The Impossible Girl

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Caitlin Smith is, so far as I can tell, the world's leading expert on Clara Oswald. And yes, I'm counting Steven Moffat and Jenna Coleman. She's also, generally speaking, one of the most insightful and interesting Doctor Who bloggers I know, and I'm honored to have her do a guest post for me. She blogs regularly on Tumblr, and is pretty much always this clever.

Oh, and if you missed it Friday, I'm doing my annual post-Christmas sale on books.

When Phil asked me to write a guest post on the Impossible Girl arc, I was surprised and honoured ...and completely lost on where to begin. It's a relatively simple arc, after all. The Doctor is fascinated by who Clara is and how she can be twice dead and yet still alive, and he focuses on solving the problem of Clara, often forgetting the person behind the mystery. He gets called out on this several times over the course of the series - by Madame Vastra, by Emma Grayling and by Clara herself. And of course in the end it turns out that the Impossible Girl is just a construct by the Doctor, and Clara-the-ordinary-girl is the important one.

Simple. There are of course interesting things to say about how the audience is complicit in the Doctor's mystification of Clara, particularly as a response to the common complaint that Moffat's female characters aren't ordinary enough. We, like the Doctor, are unable or unwilling to look beyond the surface, and thus our judgements are as flawed as we are accusing the work to be. 
But what I find particularly interesting, especially in light of series 8, is that the Impossible Girl isn't just a construct of the Doctor, nor of the audience. It's also a creation of Clara herself. It's the first we see of the control freak, of the ego maniac needy game player. The Impossible Girl is the version of Clara that she most wants to be in Series 7.

When we meet Clara, she seems so very perfect. She's clever, pretty and compassionate. She stands up to the Doctor, but not to the point of getting annoying. She's confident, but not arrogant. She's kind and loyal in how she stays to help the Maitland children. She ticks pretty much every box for what many people would consider perfect, and she definitely plays up to the societal expectations of her gender. All of these traits are the results of decisions Clara has made about the person she wants to present to the world. It would be so easy to believe that was the real Clara, because she makes herself so easy to like.

That was the first mask of Clara's we saw, but it definitely wasn’t the last. For the rest of Series 7 we see her hero persona growing and blending with the 'perfect' mask of pre-Doctor Clara. She defeats a sun god with a leaf in "The Rings of Akhaten", revealing not only how much she enjoys being the hero (complete with a deus ex machina), but also how much meaning she can give an ordinary object with the power of her determination. It's little wonder she can do the same to herself.

Clara's love of storybook tropes continues in "Journey to the Centre of the TARDIS", when she berates the Doctor with 'Good guys do not have zombie creatures. Rule one basic storytelling'. She knows what sort of story she wants her life to play out as, and what sort of role she and the Doctor each play in that story. This is also when we start to see the 'control freak' part of her personality coming out. It's one of the few traits we see this series, along with the ruthlessness she shows in Hide, that aren't part of the mask she chooses to show the world. In that, they are clues that the Clara we are seeing is not all that Clara is, and that she is very much the one controlling what we see and how we see it.

Clara's determination to play the role of hero culminates in the creation of the Impossible Girl arc itself. Her choice to leap into the Doctor's time stream was as much, if not more, about her own ambition and story and character development as it was about saving the Doctor and the universe. She paraphrases a metaphor from her mum, the woman who taught her how to impart meaning on every part of her life, and comes up with a catchphrase, before dramatically leaping to her doom/heroic climax.

The result of this was then even more creations based on Clara's preferred version of herself. Oswin and Clara Oswin are flirty, adventurous, brave, and just flawed enough to be interesting. They're heroes, as are all her echoes. They are the Impossible Girl Clara sought to become, but could only manage with the help of a little timey-wimey-ness.

Because Clara's own masks can never last. There are always cracks, because there is always more to her than she lets the world see. She's got a bubbly personality masking a bossy control freak, but the bossy control freak doesn't go away just because she's cheery. And so in the end it's not just the Doctor and the audience who are creating walls and distractions between them and the full complexity of Clara Oswald, but also Clara herself.

It's not easy to put all of yourself on show, and as of "Last Christmas" Clara still hasn't quite managed it. She got close towards the end of Series 8 with the sticky notes of what she wanted to tell Danny about, but that got cut short. It's a likely prospect for her arc in series 9, because the Impossible Girl isn't done yet, and won't be until she can just be without hiding behind a constructed version of herself. And to do that she will have to face up to why she's hiding, and what she's hiding from.
The answer to that, I think, goes right back to "Rings of Akhaten" and her 'origin story'. She lost her mum at the age of 16 and everything changed. Even her dad and her relationship with him was different, so she became the person people expected her to be, the person they needed. It gave her control over her circumstances, and her determination and skill at that control made her very, very good at it.

But Clara is also a dreamer, and a bit of an egomaniac, so her wanting to please others and meet their needs soon turned into her wanting to fulfil her own dreams. And when she was given the chance by the Doctor, well that was all she needed to start the transformation from her 'perfect' mask to her 'hero' one. However the masks and the control were also starting to become a habit and an addiction, and we saw the many negative consequences throughout Series 8. The control freak part of her, which had for so many years made her masks easy to maintain, was starting to break through and destroy them. 

Clara isn't masking herself for any particular reason anymore. Not for protection or acceptance or even wish fulfilment. She's travelling the universe with a man who loves her no matter what she does. She has everything she's dreamed of, and she doesn't need to rely on herself to be the consistency in her life. She has the freedom, finally, to let go of the masks, of the control, and just be Clara.
But when you've lived that way for almost half your life, it's not an easy task. There's no longer the need for her to be the Impossible Girl, but to be anything else Clara would have to do what the Doctor and the audience did in "The Name of the Doctor": accept that the ordinary girl behind the mask is just as, if not more, important than the mask.


I don’t expect much will change, because Clara and her masks are almost indistinguishable at this stage. You can’t pretend to be someone for so long without becoming a lot more like them. What will change, however, is her acceptance of herself. And with that, the story of the Impossible Girl will be done.

Sunday Pancaking (December 28th, 2014)


Time Travel Is Always Possible In Dreams (The Pandorica Opens/The Big Bang)

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TARDIS Erootitorum
It’s June 19th, 2010. Shout is at number one with “Shout,” which lasts both weeks of this story. Kylie Minogue, Eminem, David Guetta, Lady Gaga, and Baddiel, Skinner, and Lightning Seed also chart, the latter with a hilarious belief that England might not crash pathetically out of the World Cup. Spoiler: the day after this story wraps, they do. Also in news, David Cameron apologizes on behalf of the government for the Bloody Sunday Massacre, and George Osborne presents a budget statement full of austerity. Also, on June 26th, the entire universe ends. 

There is no point in pretending that my opinion here is anything other than what it is. I think this is decisively and thoroughly a good thing. I love the Davies era dearly, but the Moffat era is, for my money, the pinnacle of the show. Indeed, it’s basically this pair of episodes that’s why TARDIS Eruditorum exists: because I could not get them and their implications out of my head. I have been looking forward to this post since I started, and the observations I want to make about this story are, ultimately, the observations that I created the blog to make. Although, having now gotten to it, it seems like so much of what I could say is stuff I’ve made obvious, and that nobody reading this needs to have pointed out. In many ways, everything I’ve said in TARDIS Eruditorum and the entire critical apparatus for looking at Doctor Who that I’ve built exists so as to make this story the most self-evident and explicable thing imaginable. If you’ve any understanding of how the thought processes of TARDIS Eruditorum work, you can figure out most of what I like about this story without effort. Its metafiction, its alchemy, everything about it is so thoroughly in line with the approach I take to Doctor Who that there’s almost nothing to say. By spending four years building to it, I’ve left such a clearly defined piece of negative space that filling it seems unnecessary.

Let’s, then, do the obvious thing and approach it in the context of Season Five. Much of Season Five, viewed through history’s lens, has felt, understandably, like an extended exercise in incremental change from the Russell T Davies era. Which is understandable - it’s easy to forget that the gap between The End of Time Part Two and The Eleventh Hour was only three months. To people who don’t pay attention to who the writer of an episode is, which is to say, to roughly 100% of the population, a period of bedding in was important. And so we had a season that retained numerous structural elements of the Davies era: a present/future/past triptych to start the season, a thirteen episode season consisting of seven single episode stories and three two-parters, et cetera. Yes, there were some changes - the first two-parter was, despite the presence of familiar monsters, the more adult and weird of them, while the second one filled the “for kids” brief. Rory, and particularly his death, consistently failed to quite work like you’d expect. The season arc was mischievous, partially paying off in the fifth episode instead of, as one might have expected, just having the crack show up every episode. But for the most part, Season Five behaved like a slightly cracked mirror take on the Russell T Davies formula.

In one sense, that continues immaculately into The Pandorica Opens/The Big Bang, which follows key parts of the Davies formula for season finales to the letter. In another, however, the finale marks the point where Moffat breaks decisively from the Davies era and announces that this is his show now, and that it will henceforth be a fundamentally different thing. 

Unsurprisingly, the turning point comes at the cliffhanger. The Pandorica Opens is, in effect, a fairly traditional narrative collapse. Every villain in Doctor Who teams up to lock the Doctor in an inescapable prison. As usual, the threat isn’t just “bad things will happen” but “Doctor Who will end as a type of storytelling.” As with all of Davies’s finales, the plot hinges on the idea that the bad guys have already won - by the time the Doctor gets involved with events, he’s already seemingly lost. It all seems very tidy and standard issue, really.

Except that a narrative collapse is supposed to be averted, albeit at a terrible price. That’s the way these stories are supposed to work. And instead we get led to the brink of the same setup as the last season finale. As Davros put it, “your strategies have failed, your weapons are useless, and, oh. The end of the universe has come.” Except that where Journey’s End had Donna swoop in and save the day just before the Reality Bomb detonated, The Pandorica Opens goes one further. The Doctor is locked in an inescapable prison, Rory has killed Amy, River is trapped on an exploding TARDIS, and oh, yes, the end of the universe has actually come, with the cliffhanger shot just being every star in the galaxy exploding. The narrative collapse isn’t threatened - it’s allowed to happen. There’s not even some version of the get-out clause that The Sound of Drums consciously offered - no Martha escaping to have the task of saving the world single-handedly. Instead there’s nothing. Every possible avenue of escape is closed down, every possible agent who could fix things is sidelined. The narrative collapses utterly, such that, at the end of The Pandorica Opens, there’s absolutely nothing that can possibly follow it. It is, in this regard, the single most audacious cliffhanger in the entire history of Doctor Who.

This works, of course, because it’s meticulously earned. The Pandorica Opens is an efficient masterpiece. While I’m sure there exists somebody who has complained that the episode’s plot consists of the Doctor sitting around Stonehenge for fifty minutes waiting to be shoved into a box, the truth is this fact passes with almost nobody noticing it. The entire episode is an exercise in stalling, which is to say, it’s a Doctor Who episode, but its delaying tactics are gobsmackingly clever. At the top of the list is, of course, the Doctor’s speech to the assembled fleet of bad guys, which, in hindsight, accomplishes exactly nothing, but which is such a fantastic moment that nobody in their right mind cares. And the delays are used for things - while the Doctor effectively spins his wheels (and Amy spends large chunks of episode either unconscious or sitting around outside) we get the fascinatingly unexpected reintroduction of Rory. Sure, it maybe wasn’t that hard to guess that Rory was coming back, but you’d have had to poll an awful lot of Doctor Who fans to find one who guessed “as a Roman Auton.” Similarly, the pacing of the episode gives River a meaningful chunk of time in which to hold down a solo plot, which lets her be a female equivalent of the Doctor for the first time, instead of just being presented as someone who could be that. Still, The Pandorica Opens is ultimately just the setup for something altogether more extraordinary.

Obviously the first and biggest question of The Big Bang is what its first scene will be once it finishes its recap. What story do you tell when there are no possible stories to tell? The answer is, in hindsight, inevitable. You return to first principles, recreating the slow pan through Amelia’s garden that opened The Eleventh Hour. It’s easy to make far too much of the idea that the companion is an audience identification figure, but a crucial part of Amy’s character has always been that she is herself a Doctor Who fan. (Indeed, the total gap between Amelia’s long night and The Beast Below is, at fourteen years, in the same general ballpark as the Wilderness Years.) She engages with Doctor Who like a member of the audience does. And so she is the natural place to go after the narrative collapse. If we’ve dismantled the entire narrative apparatus of Doctor Who, where can we go but to the audience, left watching nothing?

It is in this context that we can understand what is otherwise a slightly strange thing to focus on: Amelia’s insistence on stars. There are several things to point out about this. First is that, even in the absence of the Doctor, her life takes the same basic path, complete with psychiatrists trying to cure her of believing what is, in fact, the truth. And yet it’s worth looking at the particulars of Amelia’s insistence on stars. She does not attempt to claim that there really are stars in the sky that we can’t see. She doesn’t try to declare that stars are real. Instead, she draws them into her pictures. She wants there to be stars. She insists not on their existence, but on their preferability. In the face of a world she doesn’t like, she tells a story of one she does.

Everything else in The Big Bang ultimately follows from this point. Once Amelia has rejected the world of “the universe has ended,” a better sort of story enters the picture as the Doctor drops off the museum flyer. And in the end Amy saves the day through the same principle: insisting on a different story than the one being told. Hindsight reveals this trick to be at the heart of Moffat’s work in Season Five - you’ll note that we described Amy’s victory in The Beast Below as being won by finding a better story to tell as well. And, of course, by the end of The Big Bang this isn’t even subtext anymore, but rather an explicit moral principle: “We’re all stories in the end. Just make it a good one.”

Again, it’s worth praising the connective tissue, not least because it’s where Moffat really does start to change the entire approach for season finales. The Pandorica Opens has nineteen credited characters. The Big Bang has ten, and two of them are Amy. The Pandorica Opens ostentatiously has more monsters than any previous story. The Big Bang has a single Dalek. There’s a move, in other words, to a small and intimate scale that’s quite unlike any previous season finale. The core of the episode is just a four character chamber piece. This is where a particular iconic TARDIS crew gets made - not just because it’s the first time we actually see the entire Pond family together, but because we spend so much time with them, letting them play off of each other and react to one another. This is, in practice, quite liberating. Moffat goes as big as it’s possible to go, crafting a cliffhanger that will never be topped in terms of sheer stakes, and then uses it to demonstrate that there’s no need to go bigger anyway.

But it is, of course, the resolution that really needs to be talked about. I’ve no idea how many times I’ve watched this story, but rewatching it for this post, I still found myself tearing up at its climax. “Raggedy Man, I remember you, and you are late for my wedding” kills me, every time, without fail. Up until the volcano scene in Dark Water, I’d have unhesitatingly called it the single greatest scene in Doctor Who, and I’m not sure I still wouldn’t. It’s a scene that justifies every theme, every idea, and every narrative approach involved in bringing it about. Many of its virtues are, of course, clear. And yet there’s something in excess of all of the thematic weight that makes it work. Moffat has written other sequences that validate my views on stories and Doctor Who as well as this. But he’s only written one other that hits this strongly after this many viewings. 

Why? What makes it work so uncannily well? Part of it is the tone - the desperate hope of it, and the mad insistence on having a better story. That tone coinciding with the beautiful moment of everything snapping together around the “something old, something new” rhyme, is an emphatically well delivered catharsis. There’s also a real beauty to Amy’s character in that moment. The bravery in delivering that speech, even as her mother bemoans all the psychiatrists they took her to, is wonderfully moving, especially for a female character. It’s such a perfect payoff for everything that Amy’s character is. And, after all the thematic buildup, there’s something profoundly appealing about the simple, emphatic declaration that Doctor Who is a better story than not Doctor Who. All of this is part of it.

But it’s not all of it. There is something else - something slightly ineffable that refuses to simply be explained. Something that, after all of this buildup, I have to admit that I simply cannot quite capture or depict. And I think that is because it is something that embraces two beautifully contradictory viewpoints. On the one hand, the basic idea of “Raggedy Man, I remember you” is the animating fantasy of storytelling, namely that there exists a story, or a telling of a story that, if you could only capture it and express it, would save the world. That there’s some combination of words and images that, with enough refinement and inspiration, could fix everything. On the other, it is fundamentally a plot development based on the desire for more stories. The only reason to bring the Doctor back, after all, is that there is still an absence and a lack - still something that needs to be said. And so we have a moment that is simultaneously the fantasy of a perfect ending and the fantasy that there never has to be an ending. And for one brief and beautiful moment, just as Amy’s desperate insistence on telling a better story gives way to the restoration of Doctor Who after its narrative collapse, these two fantasies exist, perfectly suspended and in balance. 


And that, in the end, is the point of the exercise. If that moment cannot quite be captured or looked at, then let us go with the alternative. Let us look at and understand every moment around it, crystalizing it so that this one scene stands in relief, reconstructed, if you will, by the hole left when everything else is understood. This moment when, from nothing but a child’s stubborn insistence on a better world and a better story, out of thin air, a blue box appears. The magic trick that cannot ever be explained: when something that was only ever an idea steps from the Land of Fiction into the world, real as anything. When nothing becomes something, not with a big bang, nor even with a little one, but rather with the sound that, if we are being honest, accompanies all progress, material social and otherwise: wheezing and groaning.

Doctor Who in 2014

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I think it's probably best to say everything in the form of the big, ultimate point of the exercise, which is a Top Twelve Doctor Who Stories of 2014 list. Here it is, with changes relative to my post-Death in Heaven list indicated and letter grades. This is based on having done a rewatch between Death in Heaven and Last Christmas, except for Last Christmas itself, which I rewatched tonight.

#12: Time Heist (-2, C)

Let me start by reiterating that 2014 was, for my money, the best year of Doctor Who I've been active for. I think it was better than 2005. Not more historically important or culturally impactful, but better. It's the first year since 1989 you can credibly argue had no bad stories. And there aren't a lot of years before 1989 you can really say that about either. Still, something has to be last.

Ultimately, the slight complaints I made about the direction in my initial review, on a rewatch, proved bigger than I thought. The Teller looks marvelous, but the lengthy section in the cement vaults with sets blatantly redressed with nothing but lighting gels looks cheap and tawdry. It's worth going back and watching that leaked workprint, just for informational purposes. It is a much, much better episode in black and white. Mackinnon is, as I said in my Cold War Eruditorum post, kind of the Mark Gatiss of directors. He's functional, but the direction is never the highlight of one of his stories. Here he's given a script that's functional, and nobody manages to raise it above that.

I observed early on that the first half of the season was all "let's redo standards with a new Doctor, but with old Doctor Who veterans doing the scripts," while the back half was very "let's try something new." That was the right way to structure a season that had a new Doctor to introduce, but I suspect nothing would have been harmed by having the transition to "let's try something new" come with the sixth episode instead of the seventh. This, ultimately, is the skippable episode. Best damned with faint praise: it's astonishingly good for a team-up of director of The Sontaran Stratagem/The Poison Sky and the writer of Curse of the Black Spot.

#11: Robot of Sherwood (+1, B-)

At the time, I described it as unambitious but well executed. That basically still applies. It's damning with faint praise again, but the nice thing about Mark Gatiss is he doesn't generate undue expectations. You don't put Robot of Sherwood on looking for an all-time classic, and frankly, nobody ever has. But it knows how to do everything it tries to do. This is one of the places where the ranking is deceptive. When Gatiss was this good in Season 7, he produced arguable highlights of the season. It's a testament to how good the rest of Season 8 is that this is in eleventh. It pulls up the rear with honor, in a way that, say, Evolution of the Daleks, The Long Game, or The Hungry Earth do not.

Also, I completely reject all criticism of the silliness of shooting a golden arrow into the spaceship to give it a boost. That's a highlight of the episode, that is. That's as funny as Derby, Lincoln, ZE WORLD!

#10: Into the Dalek (+1, B)

Rewatching this, the rawness of Peter Capaldi's performance really stands out. He's still figuring out how to play the Doctor, and he's not confident in the role yet. Dalek spectacle goes a non-trivial way towards covering that, and the script is a flavor of Daleks we've not really seen in the new series before. When this aired, everyone praised how well Ben Wheatley did Terry Nation/Eric Saward-style Dalek space war stuff. In hindsight, it's worth pointing out that the new series basically hasn't done anything remotely like that since Parting of the Ways. There's more innovation here than it gets credit for, in other words. It doesn't help this story to point it out, but if this had been given to Jamie Mathieson, whose skill at coming up with strong visuals is a major selling point, and put later in the season, after Capaldi had a more assured performance, it would be at least five places higher. Whereas I don't think you can say that there were many ways to dramatically improve Time Heist or Robot of Sherwood.

#9: In the Forest of the Night (-5, B)

As the fall shows, this really was disappointing on a rewatch, although the scene where Maebh reaches the heart of the forest remains a season highlight. I admit that part of it is simply that I have unusually high expectations for an episode with this title. But on a more basic level, rewatching it, I feel like the decision to try to do "a forest consumes London" was a mistake. It's beyond what the production team can actually accomplish, and they should have known that. It's trying to sell "this is the primordial forest representing the very soul of life on Earth," and it can't really get past "we went to a forest in Wales and hung some traffic lights." The script's brilliant, but it's just not well enough realized. I love what it's trying to do, and there's plenty of moments where its ambition shines through despite its flaws, but there are too many where its flaws are obscuring its ambitions. This is going to be really fun to write up for TARDIS Eruditorum, but it's got some serious problems as television.

#8: Deep Breath (-2, B+)

Post-regeneration stories are generally, at best, functional but not spectacular. This is no exception. Moffat keeps the pacing under good control, and manages to make this feel like the event it had to be, but this is blatantly a story where he focused on the details and decided nobody was going to remember the big picture anyway. It's more about completing the ritual throwing of the past onto a funeral pyre that Moffat began with Name of the Doctor than it is about 2014. Here, in other words, it's worth talking about what, for me, was the real and biggest pleasure of Doctor Who in 2014, which is that it more often than not felt new and exciting. Part of this is that I've been writing about Doctor Who for nearly four years straight now, and to be honest, the number one thing I want from a new episode is simply "something I haven't seen before." And so this really marks the cut-off point for me. Everything that goes above this on the list does so because it felt fresh and new. This goes where it does because "all it did" was effectively launch a new season of Doctor Who.

#7: Flatline (+2, B+)

Mathieson gives Harness a good run for his money at "most exciting debut," simply because he turned in two enormously effective episodes that on the one hand seem to define a style and approach (strong visuals, and an interesting take on the Doctor as someone who is drawn to putting himself in the position to make impossible choices, but who kind of hates himself for how much he likes it), and on the other are quite distinct in tone and feel. That's a big accomplishment, especially when the episodes air back to back. And many of my mild frustrations with this episode come from slightly unfair positions. I'll admit that I tried to read too much into the ending, and that I didn't give enough credit to "the monsters in the walls come out of the walls" as a mid-episode twist.

It still feels, pardon the pun, flatter than other episodes. I'm tempted to blame Mackinnon, although he actually does quite well with large swaths of this, although it's not quite clear how the "the Doctor Things it away from the train" sequence is intended to strike the reader. As with In the Forest of the Night, there are moments where they clearly know they can't actually get away with what they're trying, but are hoping they'll get points for believing their bubble wrap. It's a grand Doctor Who tradition, yes, but in a season where they confidently demonstrate they can do Into the Dalek and Listen and Mummy on the Orient Express and Dark Water, one does start to feel like "they went for more than they could possibly achieve." To quote a drunken fan almost exactly twenty years ago today, about another era's decision to try to accomplish things they should have known they couldn't in an otherwise strong story, "How could a good hack think that the BBC could make a giant rat? If he'd come to my house when I was 14 and said 'Can BBC Special Effects do a giant rat?' I'd have said no. I'd rather see them do something limited than something crap. What I resented was having to go to school two days later, and my friends knew I watched this show. They'd go 'Did you see the giant rat?!' and I'd have to say I thought there was dramatic integrity elsewhere."

Still, it deserves major credit - in hindsight, this is the episode where you kind of start hoping Clara will stay. Coleman is phenomenal in it.

#6: The Caretaker (+1, A-)

This only rose one in the rankings, but it is, I think, the one that rose most in my esteem when rewatching it. I've seen this episode get a lot of stick for being a throwback to Smith, and it's true that there are moments where Capaldi is awkward delivering Roberts's jokes. But the way the episode turns on its head at the halfway point and becomes about the Doctor and Danny meeting instead of about the farce of keeping them apart is very, very clever and smart. It really works as the transition between the familiar first part of the season and the innovative second, starting as a repetition of the Smith era and ending as something unlike anything in the Smith era.

Ultimately, the reason I really want to praise this It sets up the second half of the season, with all its boldness and swagger, incredibly well. Kill the Moon, Flatline, and Dark Water/Death in Heaven are all greatly helped by the fact that this exists. Sometimes straight-forwardly - Gareth Roberts created Courtney Wood, and Peter Harness decided to use her too. Introducing Courtney Wood alone justifies this episode ranking highly. This is, I think, the most currently underrated episode of the season.

#5: Last Christmas (N/A, all other positions calculated without considering this, A)

Obviously the speculative one of the pack, but watched for a third time in a week, I'm really struck by how many little details and gems there are. The beginning really does rewatch well once you know the final twists, with the cold open being chilling in a way you miss on the first pass. Wilmhurst gets to direct a moment more bonkers than "the moon's an egg," and he nails it. Redressing the Kill the Moon set with the light bulbs from Mummy on the Orient Express. Jenna Coleman in the background of Michael Troughton's reaction shot to the "there's a horror movie called Alien"joke, giggling. Wilmhurst's decision to shoot the dance sequence in middle distance, subverting the expected sequence where the camera focuses on Shona's interiority. Wilmhurst's direction in general - God I hope we get him again in 2015. There are so many little treats in this, just like his other two episodes, of which, note, this thing I'm raving about is actually the weakest. (It really is padded to an hour, although that's probably the price of doing an Inception pastiche on Christmas after everybody's already a bit drunk. You have to give Moffat credit, he always paces for the day of transmission, even when he's pacing for rewatches as well.)

I've been using the Oblique Strategies deck lately, and really finding it helpful. And part of that has been the respect for doing something that feels new that this series has given me. It's as though, in place of the tone meetings of old, there's been an active discussion every week "how do we make this new?" But my favorite card in the entire deck is "change nothing and continue with immaculate consistency," because I think in its own way it's the most clever of cards. (My second favorite card is, of course, "honor thy error as hidden intention.") And the ending of the episode feels like, after a season of variety and pushing things, the gloriously arrogant decision to do just that - give us a Season Nine in the exact same vein as the one they just nailed.

#4: Dark Water/Death in Heaven (Unchanged, A)

An absolutely brilliant finale that was full of surprises and delights. The volcano scene and its immediate aftermath is a strong contender for my favorite scene in Doctor Who, and I feel about "do you think I care for you so little that betraying me would make any difference" like I do "Raggedy Man, I remember you." The UNIT bit of Death in Heaven feels a little like stalling for time, and most of Dark Water was stalling for time. The latter works because it's having so much fun with tension (the slow, decadent reveal of the Cybermen followed by Missy's identity is truly a thing of joy), though, and the former is only a problem because of the decision to put UNIT at the end of Flatline. Rewatching it, what really stands out is the way in which every twist and escalation of stakes is really, genuinely surprising and effective, including nuking UNIT halfway through the episode and having it be a showdown in a cemetery with hella crushed blacks.

All in all, this is a superb execution of "season finale" in much the same way that Deep Breath is a superb execution of "launch a new Doctor," and for that matter like Last Christmas is a superb execution of "Christmas special." And, in keeping with my general aesthetic for the season, this is right next to Last Christmas and on the opposite end of the chart from Deep Breath because this feels fresh and new, as the season finale of "season one of a new era" should.

In other words, it's impossible to imagine this with Matt Smith, and that really does feel like it should be the goal of Capaldi's first season finale. Moffat has managed the impressive feat of reinventing Doctor Who in his fifth year on the job of running it. There's a confidence and subtlety - a sense of when to put the theme explicitly in dialogue and when to pull back and let people's performances do the talking. And the performances are so good. Samuel Anderson, Michelle Gomez, Jenna Coleman, and Peter Capaldi all get moments where they take great material and live up to it. After a phenomenal season, it's incredibly satisfying to see the show stick the landing. Still, there are, for me, slightly more thrilling pleasures.

#3: Mummy on the Orient Express (+2, A+)

I'll admit it - I completely understand why everyone loved this on rewatch. It's just a hell of a fun thing to sit down with, in the same way that The Robots of Death is, which is to say, as a sort of impeccable demonstration of everything this era of Doctor Who can do well.  It's a solid script from Mathieson, and an excellent performance from Capaldi, but what really makes this is the director, Paul Wilmhurst, who is absolutely the find of 2014. He's got a beautiful knack for visual storytelling. If you cut out all the linking material and just watch this in terms of the six Mummy attacks, it still works. Each one both develops the language of the 66 second sequence and advances the plot. The linking sections are still excellent, with each death managing to change the stakes and make everyone behave a little differently, but those 396 seconds are a masterclass in storytelling unto themselves. One of the advantages of Doctor Who is that it can reinvent the wheel and come up with new storytelling techniques and visual language every week. Not since The Caves of Androzani has a technique been this thoroughly explored in its debut story.

On top of that, it's got a great ending. The scene of the Doctor and Clara on the beach, where he justifies himself, slightly sadly, but confidently all the same, is marvelously well done. Moffat has, for several years, been a master of theme-in-dialogue. But this season really advances that technique, with numerous moments where the theme is bolder and deeper for having been left implicit. The thing this benefits the most is the friendship between Clara and the Doctor, which is endlessly reaffirmed through action, as opposed to through flowery speeches. A lot of why this works is an incredibly savvy sense of when to use theme-in-dialogue. Nowhere is that clearer than the extremely blatant bit about having to choose even when the choices are bad, and the "is it an addiction?" scene from Clara. And yet it pays off with Clara's decision to keep traveling with the Doctor, lying to Danny and then the Doctor in rapid succession, and telling us so much about who she is in the process, for better and for worse.

#2: Listen (Unchanged, A+)

Steven Moffat hands Douglas Mackinnon a script that really just requires not screwing up, and Mackinnon obliges. I've watched this five or six times, and it doesn't stop being a delight. It's everything you want a Moffat episode to be, but between Capaldi's rapidly maturing performance and the freshness of the Clara/Danny scenes, it managed to feel fresh and new even as it used the old, classic tropes. It felt like it was going to be an instant classic. It was.

It is perhaps worth noting that part of why it felt like an instant classic was that people had seen it - it was the script that everyone was buzzing about of the first five, and it was leaked as a workprint and everyone loved it. Actually, there's a charming detail of the workprint leaks - the hackers staggered them out, dropping the scripts, then Deep Breath and a tiny glimpse of Into the Dalek, confirming that they had it. Then a good bit later, the rest started leaking, accelerating as the premiere of Deep Breath approached. But Listen was held back until last, after Time Heist. Seriously, the hackers sequenced the leaks like an advertising campaign for Deep Breath. It was like the uberfan version of Guardians of the Peace and Lizard Squad.

Which is ultimately the argument for why the workprint leaks did no damage, embarrassing as they might have been. As with Rose, the episodes were good. If you've got good material, it's still good in the early versions, and in the final ones, people appreciate that it's gone from good to great. And to his credit, actually, Moffat admitted that as a fan, he'd have downloaded the hell out of those workprints.

#1: Kill the Moon (Unchanged, A+)

I committed myself to a critical position with this one, and rewatching it, I stand by that position. I adore this episode. "The moon's an egg" is brilliant. The first half manages to put pieces on the board while moving along at a nice clip, and every single scene after the line "the moon's an egg" is a brilliant, punch the air moment. Wilmhurst's direction is fantastic, Harnesses script is fantastic, Capaldi's performance makes a staggering leap forward. I honestly cannot think of a single flaw here. Watching this for the first time was a genuine highlight of my 2014. I know there are people who hate this, and it is genuinely my pleasure to tell them I think they're out of their minds for it.

Really. I will back up the claim that this is flawless against the common objections. It doesn't matter that the science is rubbish. The entire point of the "the moon's an egg" line is that it completely, out of left field turns the premise of the episode on its head. It's delivered with an emphasis on its ludicrousness, with a great reaction shot of Clara wearing an expression of "did you seriously just say that." And Coleman has the cleverness to play the storming out of the TARDIS scene accordingly, delivering the line "Do you know what? It was, it was cheap, it was pathetic. No, no, no. It was patronising" so that it's a related line to complaining that good guys not having time zombies was basic storytelling. The bad science is part of the episode's point, as it turns it's 1960s-70s near future space sci-fi into fantasy, then plays out the consequences of that.

This does sacrifice the effectiveness of the first half on a rewatch. But I remember my first viewing, and the first half crackled. Moffat told Harness to "Hinchcliffe the shit out of it," apparently, and he obliged, keeping everything moving at a nice clip with lunar horror while he gets his ducks in a row. But this is how you do setup. There's a lot, conceptually, going on in this story. It needed the time.

I don't think a lot of people give enough credit for the trick with the audience's affect, and the way it used the actual home lighting of millions of British citizens to make a point about ethics and politics and the importance of conscientious but emphatic descent, enough credit. I think that was a sublimely clever (and, yes, lucky) piece of television that happened, and was brilliant and worth doing. It was wonderful to see the physicality of television used for something other than a Big Event Episode. The same way Death in Heaven was elevated by going out the day before Remembrance Sunday, this was elevated by a full, ripe early autumn moon that hung in the early evening sky right as this episode happened.

And it's not a pro-life allegory, and I'll tell you how I know. Because when Harness came back to Twitter he answered a question about it, and said that he didn't want to interfere with audience interpretations. Which is not the thing someone says when they're doing a big angry allegory about abortion. It would be a bizarrely right-wing viewpoint for a British man who's emigrated to Sweden to hold, and he just plain doesn't seem that right-wing. I see how the subtext got in there, but it's an accidental subtext just as plainly as the "The Ukipquiet Dead" interpretation is.

But, of course, if someone asked Harness on Twitter if he intended it as a magical incantation about the importance of radical direct action in the name of preserving the environment and he said that he didn't want to interfere with audience interpretations, well, I'd say he's just being modest.

So, three A+ episodes, nothing below a C. I think that says it all. 2014. Wow. Roll on 2015.

Comics Reviews (December 31st, 2014)

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SHIELD #1

Will probably get the second issue of this, as I'm a sucker for Ms. Marvel, but I have to say, making this a Marvel version of Brave and the Bold with Coulson as the organizer is not really the take on a comics version of Agents of SHIELD I'd been hoping for. Still, reasonably promising, as first issues go.

Miracleman Annual #1

The Grant Morrison story is the disposable bit of Moore imitation you'd expect a 1984 Morrison blind submission to Warrior to be, and is of historical interest only. The Milligan/Allred story, on the other hand, is rather cute - a satisfying homage both to the barmy 1950s original adventures of Marvelman and to Moore's reinvention of the characters. On the whole, this is disposable, but it's also the most satisfying issue of Miracleman to date. 21 whole story pages for your $4.99, and frankly, reprinting Morrison's original script is worthwhile backmatter.

Through Powdered Teeth (The Last War in Albion Part 77: Valerie)

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Last War in Albion will now be running on Thursdays.

This is the fifth of fifteen parts of The Last War in Albion Chapter Nine, focusing on Alan Moore's work on V for Vendetta for Warrior (in effect, Books One and Two of the DC Comics collection). An omnibus of all fifteen parts can be purchased at Smashwords. If you purchased serialization via the Kickstarter, check your Kickstarter messages for a free download code.

The stories discussed in this chapter are currently available in a collected edition, along with the eventual completion of the story. UK-based readers can buy it here.

Previously in The Last War in AlbionMoore's second book of V for Vendetta largely sidelined the title character in favor of focusing on Evey Hammond, the girl he rescued in the first chapter.

"We gasped upon Devonian beaches, huddled under Neolithic stars. Spat blood through powdered teeth, staining each other as we kissed. Always we loved. How could we otherwise, when you are so like me, my sweet, but in a different guise?" - Alan Moore, The Mirror of Love

Figure 584: The title character makes a fleeting appearance in
Book Two, tacitly answering Gordon's question. (Written by Alan
Moore, art by David Lloyd, from "Variety" in Warrior #19, 1984)
The next few chapters focus on her life with Gordon up until he’s killed when a deal goes wrong and she attempts to avenge him before apparently being arrested. The most interesting of these is probably Chapter Six, “Variety,” which takes place within The Kitty-Kat Keller, a gentleman’s club in which an unnamed dancer goose-steps to a fascist cabaret song (“So if some blonde and blue eyed boy / would care to teach me strength through joy / and see that all my liberal tendencies are cured; / if it should be decreed by fate / that you invade my neighbouring state / then you will find my frontiers open, rest assured.”) as Evey observes the various patrons: Rose Almond being tossed out because her card is overdrawn, an associate of Gordon’s named Robert being told by Almond’s replacement at the Finger that he’ll no longer be honoring their deal to keep his elderly mother out of a home (“Homes? They’re gas chambers!” Robert exclaims, to which Creedy responds, “Not gas. If you want the truth, Robert, there’s just three good South Ken boys with iron bars.”), and another associate from Scotland named Ally Harper, who will turn out to be Gordon’s murderer next chapter. This selection of petty and everyday degradations offers a perspective not really seen yet within V for Vendetta, one that pays off its original conception as a 1930s mystery strip in the noir tradition, and culminates in Robert having a breakdown, shouting to the bar that “we shouldn’t have to live like this” and that “I wish the bastard bomb had ‘it bastard London. That’s what I wish. I wish we were all dead!” at which point the Fingermen in the bar surround him and beat him. Evey and Gordon head out to the street, sickened by what they’ve seen, with Evey asking Gordon, “he’s right, wasn’t he? We shouldn’t have to live like this,” to which Gordon replies that, “no, kid, we shouldn’t. What are you going to do about it,” as the perspective pulls back, revealing V on a rooftop above and offering a tacit answer to Gordon’s question. 

Figure 585: The beginning of Valerie's note.
(Written by Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd, from
"Vermin" in Warrior #24, 1984)
But in many ways the heart of Book Two, and indeed of V for Vendetta as a whole is the four chapter stretch following Evey’s apparent arrest as she attempts to murder Gordon’s killer. The first is a hallucinatory dream sequence entitled “Vicissitude” in which the various men in Evey’s life - her father, Gordon, and V blur together along with the bishop who was going to molest Evey when she went undercover for V, becoming an unsettling dreamscape of exploitation and degradation, ending with her being grabbed by V (in a panel Lloyd tellingly draws to perfectly mirror her arrest in the previous chapter) and then waking up in a prison cell. The next chapter, “Vermin,” depicts Evey in a squalid cell, obsessing over the rat, and finally being taken out and interrogated over her associations with V and her attempted murder of Harper, although they instead accuse her of planning to murder Creedy, on the grounds that he is “a frequent customer of the Kitty Kat Keller.” They then blindfold her and shave her head and dump her back in her cell with the rat. “Only now I don’t mind the rat,” she narrates, “because I’m no better.” In the chapter’s closing panels, she discovers a letter, scrawled on toilet paper, written by a woman named Valerie.

Figure 586: Evey cowers within her cell. (Written by Alan Moore,
art by David Lloyd, from "Valerie" in Warrior #25, 1984)
The next chapter, entitled “Valerie,” is one of the most extraordinary works of Alan Moore’s career. The timeframe in which it takes place is left deliberately vague, a fact emphasized by Evey’s narration on the first page: “I know every inch of this cell. I know every pitted indentation in the rough plaster like I know my own body. I don’t know where I am. I know it gets dark and then light; that I wake then sleep; that time passes measured in hair growing back beneath my arms where they won’t let me shave. I don’t know what day it is.” Her only comfort and sanity is the letter she found at the end of the previous chapter. “I read her letter,” Evey continues, “I hide it, I sleep, I wake, they question me, I cry, it gets dark, it gets light, I read her letter again… over and over…” while the art depicts her seated in front of a bowl of water, with a guard who shoves her head into it to torture her, hammering home the cruel and cyclic nature of her abuse.

Figure 587: Evey being tortured. (Written by Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd,
from "Valerie" in Warrior #25, 1984)
The text of the letter is in fact begun at the end of the previous installment, in a panel drawn from Evey’s perspective as she discovers it. Its desperate tone mirrors Evey’s own misery. “I have a pencil,” Valerie writes, “a little one they did not find. I am a woman. I hid it inside me. Perhaps I won’t be able to write again, so this is a long letter about my life. It is the
Figure 588: Valerie caresses her
first girlfriend's hand. (Written by
Alan Moore, art by Tony Weare, from
"Valerie" in Warrior #25, 1984)
only autobiography I will ever write and oh god I’m writing it on toilet paper,” a harrowing set of details that reinforces the sense of routine depravity implicit in this regime of pointless and repetitive torture, such that the single interrogation depicted within it stands in for countless others before and after.

The second page opens with a close-up of the page shown at the end of the previous chapter, before continuing the text of Valerie’s letter, with the art switching to some fill-in art from Tony Weare (who previously drew a few pages of Chapter Five, as well as the interstitial “Vincent”) depicting the autobiography Valerie narrates. She was born, the letter says, in 1957, twenty-four years before Evey, in Nottingham. “I met my first girlfriend at school,” she says. “Her name was Sara. She was fourteen and I was fifteen but we were both in Miss Watson’s class. Her wrists. Her wrists were beautiful,” Valerie says, as Weare draws a close-up panel of two feminine hands resting comfortably and intimately against each other. 

Figure 589: "Valerie" featured art from Tony Weare,
whose scratchier style was a contrast with David Lloyd's.
(Written by Alan Moore, from Warrior #25, 1984)
She tells of coming out to her parents at the age of nineteen when she “took a girl called Christine home to meet my parents.” Weare, whose scratchier and looser style results in somewhat more expressive faces than the eye-bulging grotesques of David Lloyd, depicts the shocked reactions of her parents, and Valerie confirms
that “my mother said I broke her heart. But,” she continues, as Weare draws a landscape shot of Valerie standing at a rail, looking over a pond, with roses growing in the near ground, “it was my integrity that was important. Is that so selfish? It sells for so little. But it’s all we have left in this place. It is the very last inch of us…” she continues, and then the final panel returns to David Lloyd’s art, picking up in the exact instant that the first page left off, with Evey’s head plunged into the water, as the narration concludes that “within that inch we are free.”

Figure 590: Evey's head is violently pulled back above water, interrupting
her recollection of Valerie's letter. (Written by Alan Moore, art by David
Lloyd, from "Valerie" in Warrior #25, 1984)
With this, the scene returns to Evey’s torture. Her head is held underwater for one more panel before her interrogator curtly says, “alright” and she is yanked back up, water streaming from her face, which is contorted in pain. “Let’s review the facts,” her interrogator continues, and outlines a wholly erroneous account of how “Codename V” gave her orders to murder Peter Creedy. Her interrogator is entirely faceless, depicted by Lloyd as a straight black silhouette over a starkly white panel, so white that it swallows the outline of his text bubbles. He never asks what happened - merely presents a narrative and gives her the opportunity to assent to the lies within.

Figure 591: As Evey's head is shoved back under the water, her recollections
resume. (Written by Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd, from "Valerie" in Warrior
#25, 1984)
Every does not, insisting, “No! No, please, that isn’t true.” Her interrogator, in a show of mock pity, simply says, “oh dear. Rossiter.” It is not a question, and the guard behind Evey responds with a simple “sir.” Evey begins to scream and beg, but to no avail - the guard grabs her by the back of the head and shoves her face back into the water, drowning her again. The narration from Valerie’s letter starts up again: “London: I was happy in London.”

Figure 592: Valerie and Ruth hold each other as the war
breaks out, with roses in the foreground. (Written by Alan
Moore, art by Tony Weare, from "Valerie" in Warrior #25, 1984)
And so the action cuts back to Valerie’s story, with another page of her autobiography presented as text, telling about how “in 1981 I played Dandini in Cinderella. My first rep work. The world was strange and rusting and busy with invisible crowds behind the hot lights and all that breathless glamour.” She talks of her early forrays into London’s gay scene, and her frustrations with and sense of alienation from it. “So many of them just wanted to be gay. It was their life. Their ambition. All they talked about. And I wanted more than that,” she says. In 1986, she says, she got a role in a film called The Salt Flats, where she met a woman named Ruth and began an affair. “We lived together,” she says, “and on Valentine’s Day she sent me roses, and oh god we had so much. Those were the best years of my life.” 

Figure 593: The marching Norsefire crowd transitions to Evey's torture.
(Written by Alan Moore, art by Tony Weare and David Lloyd, from "Valerie"
in Warrior #25, 1984)
This section, for attentive readers, offers a number of clues as to what is happening. The Salt Flats is the film that V stole a poster for back in Chapter Two of Book Two, and the image of roses has throughout the book been closely linked with V, who left flowers besides his early victims, and who spent his time in Larkhill gardening and growing roses. The significance of this is further emphasized by the next panel, featuring Valerie and Ruth shown from behind, cuddling on a sofa and watching the news, with three roses in the foreground. “In 1988 there was the war,” Valerie narrates, “and after that there were no more roses. Not for anybody,” the final two panels of the page showing a massive parade of men in Norsefire uniforms, marching left to right across the panel, such that the final panel, another shot of the guard drowning Evey, serves as the symbolic head of their pack.

Figure 594: Evey's torture is contrasted with the narration of Valerie's
letter detailing her own torture. (Written by Alan Moore, art by David
Lloyd, from "Valerie" in Warrior #25, 1984)
The fifth page returns to the scenes of Evey’s torture, as she’s pulled out of the bowl, blindfolded, and shoved back into her cell. But the text continues Valerie’s story, describing how “in 1992, after the take-over, they started rounding up the gays. They took Ruth while she was out looking for food. Why are they so frightened of us,” she asks. As Evey is tortured and shoved around, Valerie talks about how Ruth was tortured into giving up Valerie’s name and claiming she had seduced her. “I didn’t blame her,” Valerie insists. “But she did. She killed herself in her cell. She couldn’t live with betraying me. With giving up that last inch.” Valerie tells of her own capture - of how “they shaved off my hair. They held my head down a toilet bowl and told jokes about lesbians. They brought me here and gave me drugs. I can’t feel my tongue anymore. I can’t speak. The other gay woman here, Rita, died two weeks ago.”

Figure 595: Evey, abandoned once again in her
cell. (Written by Alan Moore, art by David Lloyd,
from "Valerie" in Warrior #25, 1984)
This last point once again serves as a clue for attentive readers, being the second mention of Rita within V for Vendetta. The previous one came up at the end of Book One, as Finch is reading Adam Susan excerpts from Dr. Surridge’s diary of her time at Larkhill, which include the off-handed comment that “Rita Boyd, the Lesbian, died at tea-time. During the autopsy we found four tiny festigial fingers forming within the calf of her leg. Given that V burnt Larkhill to the ground in his escape, it is impossible that Valerie’s toilet paper autobiography could have survived, or that Evey could actually be imprisoned there. But this clue is subtle and overwhelmed by the images of Evey’s degradation and the stark, awful blacks of the cell she is shoved back into. “It is strange that my life should end in such a terrible place,” Valerie’s narration continues, “but for three years I had roses and I apologised to nobody. I shall die here. Every inch of me shall perish.” The page ends with a medium shot of Evey, contorted in pain within her darkened cell, as Valerie’s narration continues: “except one.” 

Figure 596: Evey sits in her cell, reading Valerie's letter, alongside
reprises of earlier panels. (Written by Alan Moore, art by Tony Weare
and David Lloyd, from "Valerie" in Warrior #25, 1984)
After these five pages alternating between illustrating Valerie’s life and illustrating the horrors of Evey’s captivity, the chapter concludes with a final page that alternates between them. “An inch,” Valerie writes, over a reprise of the panel of Valerie and Sara’s hands touching in Miss Watson’s class. “It’s small and it’s fragile and it’s the only thing in the world that’s worth having. We must never lose it, or sell it, or give it away. We must never let them take it from us,” she continues, over a small panel of Evey’s weary and exhausted face reading the letter yet again. 

Figure 597: Evey kisses the bottom
of the letter, where Valerie left a
single X. (Written by Alan Moore, art
by David Lloyd, from "Valerie" in
Warrior #25, 1984)
This is followed by a reprise of the image of Valerie standing by a pond watching the birds, a rosebush behind her, as her narration continues: “I don’t know who you are, or whether you’re a man or woman. I may never see you. I will never hug you or cry with you or get drunk with you. But I love you. I hope that you escape this place,” she writes, as the art switches back to Evey, now in medium shot, sitting on her wooden cot, the toilet paper scroll hanging from her hands, an isolated and haggard figure in her chiaroscuro cell. “I hope that the world turns and that things get better, and that one day people have roses again.” Valerie makes her final appearance in the next panel, a close-up of her, still standing at the rail, watching the ducks. “I wish I could kiss you,” she writes, and then signs her letter, “Valerie,” the text positioned in the top-right corner of the panel. In the bottom-right, a final note - a single “x” to represent the kiss she can never give to the reader she will never know she has. 

Figure 598: Evey's last inch. (Written by Alan Moore, art
by David Lloyd, from "Valerie" in Warrior #25, 1984)
The art cuts back to Evey for the final row of panels, her face in shadow, a single tear visible, the narration returning to her instead of simply her quoting Valerie. “I know every inch of this cell,” she thinks, as she holds the scrap of toilet paper up, her face shrunken and lined with wrinkles that should be impossible for a woman who is only sixteen years old, and kisses it softly on the x. “This cell knows every inch of me.” And a final panel, her eyes and nose, weathered, single tear still suspended on her face, the edges of it simply fading out to the stark and infinite whiteness of the page. 

“Except one.”

I. Oh.: The Doctors Revisited (Peter Davison)

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The entire Doctors Revisited series takes a fundamental turn here, and largely not for the better. Where the Tom Baker episode merely brought in the actor who played the Doctor as one of its primary talking heads, here the show has access to essentially all of the major stars of the era. Where the first four episodes were basically anchored by two Scottish fanboys, here Davison, Strickson, Fielding, Sutton, and Waterhouse are the stars, with Tennant and Moffat contributing only choice insights.

For this specific instance, at least, it is to the program's detriment. The thing is, of course, that we know both Moffat and Tennant's opinions of the Davison era, since they each, in their own ways, expressed it in "Time Crash." Moffat, in particular, has been an outspoken defender of the Davison era for nearly twenty years now. There are hints of their impassioned defense of Davison throughout, but it's easy to wish they'd spent a little less time spoiling all the twists of Earthshock right before they showed it and a little more time fleshing out the initial claim that Davison brought "believability" to the part.

And yet it's equally worth noting what isn't here. Nobody is being snarky. Davison and Fielding, in particular, have been positively withering about aspects of their time on the program elsewhere, but here both of them give thoroughly enthused performances. Nobody says anything nasty about Adric or the effects. The only thing anyone giggles at is the celery. As we turn the corner into 1980s Doctor Who, there's not a hint that they're entering a problem area. Indeed, people were generally more willing to laugh at the Troughton and Pertwee eras than they are this.

The result, though, is soulless. The era is presented as good, but without the clear case for what was good about it that the first four installments made. It feels like people mumbling bland platitudes and explaining the plots of thirty year old television episodes, which, of course, it is, just like the first four installments, but they did much better jobs of covering that. And we should, perhaps, wonder what bits of interview got left on the cutting room floor.

Which does rather bring us back to Earthshock. It was inevitable, of course, that we were going to get this or The Caves of Androzani, and while one might have hoped for the latter, you kind of knew it had to be this. And in some ways that's good. We complained that Spearhead From Space made it too easy on the Pertwee era. The same could easily have been said about Caves of Androzani, and it really can't of Earthshock, which strays into camp in more ways than just Beryl Reid. And while nobody introduces the episode that way, the fact that they hype its surprises while simultaneously spoiling both of them does, shall we say, set up a few other surprises for audiences for whom this is an introduction to history.

I am, admittedly, not a huge fan of Earthshock, but it's one of those ones like Inferno where if the rest of the world would just agree to stop claiming it was an all-time classic, I'd be happy to stop criticizing it. It absolutely has its charms - it's just that those charms are more akin to The Stones of Blood than City of Death. But after a somewhat disappointingly bland summary of the Davison era, there's something charmingly appropriate about good old Earthshock. Following this particular documentary with that particular episode is, at least, going to give everyone a very solid sense of what the Peter Davison era was like. It may not have been what they were going for, but it worked nicely. 
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